Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

tail of threat hiku

For JCB Brul's Shaped Haiku Poetry Contest 


15 June 2025 
Contest Judged:  7/1/2025 6:13:00 PM
1st Place




silent desert night—
                                 a shadow curls its tail high,
                                                                ___          .--.
                                                              .'       `.__/__/__
                                                           /             .-'           `' -.
                                                          |         .'                       \
                                                           \.-.-'     .--.           .--.  |
                                                          (o o)   |        \      /     |/
                                                           \_/     \__/ o\_/o \__/
                                                           //\        \__/      \__/
                                                          || |       .'      /^\      '.
                                                          ((_)      /      (       )     \
                                                                      \        `-'        /
                                                                          `.__     __.'
                                                                               `"""`
                                                            sting beneath the stars.

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thriveni c mysore July 2, 2025 at 6:42 PM unique, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!! Bernardo F. Asuncion July 3, 2025 at 12:04 AM Thanks, Thriveni. Appreciated.

Crystol Woods July 2, 2025 at 10:34 AM Wow. Congratulations xo

Linda Alice Fowler July 2, 2025 at 7:06 AM Wow...cool shape is right! Congratulations Bernard! :) Bernardo F. Asuncion July 3, 2025 at 12:05 AM Thanks, dear Ma'am Lin.

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2025 at 9:36 PM Cool shape! Congrats Bernardo F. Asuncion July 3, 2025 at 12:05 AM Much thanks, dear Ma'am Rea.

JC Brul July 1, 2025 at 8:30 PM Brace yourself and runnn hehe. Congratulation on your top win with this exceptionally shaped haiku. ^__^ Bernardo F. Asuncion July 3, 2025 at 12:07 AM Thank you so much, dear Sister JCB. It's a challenging shape.