Tahitain Rum

Ssip your
Shine
If you wanna
Don't let it
Be ah dirtyglass
Make you
Do things you
Don't wanna
Gulping cold ones
Down to fast
Sip the shine if
You wanna
Drink it
From a fluted glass

There is a thyme for
Everything 
Opps for everyone
Don't act seasoned
When your weak as
Water
F*cling up
Acting dumb

When she's wild
And wants attention
Changing lyrics to
Your songs
Your feebled minded
Bickering
Will have everything
You do as wrong

Put the broom
Back in the corner
Shower and make the
Bed
She be out there fixing
Breakfast
Not listen to ah word
You said
Sip your whiskey with
Your coffee
Don't take that boot
Off the fence
Remember it ain't so
Complicated
Just remember who 
Your with
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:26:00 AM
great company and cheap whiskey the right smile will age the batch desserts will knock off some of that tingle that kind of tingle that spoils the batch whisper to the woman your intenstions she might slap your face make arrangments if she wishes to go some were and kiss your face
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:23:00 AM
put the forks out on the table line the napkins in a row wipe your boots off in the parlor put the coats outside the door dust off your filthy pant leggs tell the next in line how it goes
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:21:00 AM
clean and polish your own saddle you won't say I tried to throw you off don't say mine is greasy coming up in here acting boss pay attention to what you're doing hold the reigns and don't let go great company and cheap whiskey it's fair when you let them know
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:17:00 AM
don't drink your champenge from dirty glasses gravey's best the day it's made tenderizing meat don't make it tasty seasoning makes it great don't get by on second glances she'll remember the first water is the remedy for drinking it's best for quenching thrist
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:14:00 AM
taint worth speaking tenses just tell her where you've been actin cool on second glances might indicate who you're with aint no morning like the first one get your lover words ready if your luky she'll want your loving or she'll tell you what kinda fool she's been
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