Tactile

On your face I see
That look, that brings
To mind an open
Sea in which I swim
And silky feel, in duvet
Sink and skin that’s
Flush a reddish pink
As warm as caramel
Scented soft and lavish.
In your eyes so bright
We smile, moments
True and pleasure
Keep , into your 
Bosom  pressing
Deep and tummies
Touch , we nestle
Just before we gently
Fall asleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 4:12 AM
I like your SE response--below. this is almost a lullaby to me.
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 5:30 PM
very pretty, romantic, enjoyed it
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Very romantic, and I loved that warm as caramel line. Yum! LUv, andrea
Brown Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Good morning David, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Meade Stephenson Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Magnificent piece you have penned here David. Softly sweet with romance.... paints a loving pic in my mind... thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary~
Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 4:15 AM
Cuddling before falling asleep helps my mind relax in this "open sea." This is a very uplifting, romantic poem, David. I noticed on Andrea's blog that we are both "mediators." From your poem I can tell you know how to find joy in life as well. Thank you for sharing these sweet thoughts. Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 12:47 AM
You havent lived until she's struck with all her charm...Im going to fall asleep thinking of your poem. BG
Chircop Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 11:25 PM
This is Romantic and beautiful...Sweet and Warm as the caramel in the poem..Charma
Byrne Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 10:50 PM
Hurrah! My first disgruntled fan!
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