Tactile

On your face I see
That look, that brings
To mind an open
Sea in which I swim
And silky feel, in duvet
Sink and skin that’s
Flush a reddish pink
As warm as caramel
Scented soft and lavish.
In your eyes so bright
We smile, moments
True and pleasure
Keep , into your 
Bosom  pressing
Deep and tummies
Touch , we nestle
Just before we gently
Fall asleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/1/2010 4:12:00 AM
I like your SE response--below. this is almost a lullaby to me.
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Date: 3/31/2010 5:30:00 PM
very pretty, romantic, enjoyed it
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:40:00 PM
Very romantic, and I loved that warm as caramel line. Yum! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:14:00 AM
Good morning David, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:49:00 AM
Magnificent piece you have penned here David. Softly sweet with romance.... paints a loving pic in my mind... thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:15:00 AM
Cuddling before falling asleep helps my mind relax in this "open sea." This is a very uplifting, romantic poem, David. I noticed on Andrea's blog that we are both "mediators." From your poem I can tell you know how to find joy in life as well. Thank you for sharing these sweet thoughts. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:47:00 AM
You havent lived until she's struck with all her charm...Im going to fall asleep thinking of your poem. BG
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Date: 3/30/2010 11:25:00 PM
This is Romantic and beautiful...Sweet and Warm as the caramel in the poem..Charma
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:50:00 PM
Hurrah! My first disgruntled fan!
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