Brian Strand Poet Imagism

Tabb-Prodigal

Out of error,a fear,
             Then a lie;
Out of regret,a farewell,
             Then a sigh;
Out of parting,a change,
              Then a trial;
Out of reunion,a relief
             Graceful smile.

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Sara Kendrick February 6, 2010 at 9:40 AM Glad that prodigal came back. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and enjoying my flights of fantasy. Escapism is great until someone yells Gran or Sar....Sara

Gerard Keogh Jr. February 5, 2010 at 4:13 PM I like you. I love your contests. You are versatile to the Nth degree. That's a great trait to have. Regards, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 5, 2010 at 2:23 PM Wonderful words in this Imagism portrait of tabb-Prodigal... the graceful smile shows the happy ending.. enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown February 5, 2010 at 11:07 AM Youe pen seems to be flowing with such ease today my friend. Thank you for posting and sharing your work with us again today. Always a pleasure to read Brian. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2010 at 8:03 AM Lots of interesting thoughts in this one, Brian. (I'm probably not in the contest you mentioned because I may be helping her. haha) Luv, Andrea

Nick Bagnall February 5, 2010 at 5:13 AM I like it, I don't think I understand it, but I like it

Anthony Nutter February 5, 2010 at 3:06 AM Wow, so few words saying and portraying volumes. Excellent write.

Sean Kelly February 5, 2010 at 12:47 AM Nailed it , again Brian . Will this also apply to Capt.Terry ? , or would that be a " Bridge " too far ???? ....

Susan Palli February 5, 2010 at 12:33 AM Well done!