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For picture prompt limerick contest

Ta Hell With The Water

A seven-mag earthquake had come in a blink 
And look what it done to my bathroom sink 
It had broken it all up 
So, I found a good cup 
And I poured myself a very cold drink 

The water had tasted nasty for real...ha
So, I gave it to my ex-girlfriend Sheila 
She drank most of it up 
Then she handed me the cup
The hell with water, I drank Tequilla
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Kitchin Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Charlie, this is a cute limerick set, nice to see you on PS, best of luck in the contest.
Ashley Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Dear Charlie, my witty poet friend, your limerick had me giggling about your "ex-girlfriend Sheila" and your humorous finale with "Tequilla"! A great set of lims! Warmest wishes and cheers! ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 8:52 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick writes. Thanks for the laugh. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Lol, very wise Charlie, cheers. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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