Syzygy of the Shattered Vessel - DHR

Written: July 14, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Daniel Henry Rodgers

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I've locked this dark, borrowed shore,         Flee this acid-clogged floor.
I guard the vault of my pain,                       I'm the phantom at your pane.
Cold starlight marks a sharp track,              Break from this blind void of black!
I smash the chalice of shame.                      Escape this specter of blame!
This pristine sanctum stands tall,                 Smite this driftwood into drawl.
Warped in a speedball slipstream,               before this shape-shifting dream.
No liquid spirit shall steal.                            My eternal cosmic seal.
I steer through galaxies deep,                      wake from this deceptive sleep!
I smash the siren's black crown.                   Cast this madness to the drown!
I chart the comets of truth,                           Reclaim my stolen, raw youth!
The silver slivers weave fate.                         Rip the fabric of this hate!
A fearless breach clears the sky.                   Healing wrecked space could imply. 


             I break from all grips of woe, and leave the strap chains below,
             I cast out the shroud of shame, to chase the comet's hot flame.
             Trials spur my spirit higher, to chisel out my doused fire,
             I weave my nerve through the night, the advent from darkness-light.
             I carve paths the stars design, stride their fire on threads divine,
             I rise to meet stars above, crown my path with graceful love.
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Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 3:53 PM
I didn’t even know how to approach this contest. 😂You of course being brilliant make it look like it’s easy. Great job and congratulations on your win!
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 9:44 PM
gorgeous, and not common!! I love your style, it's powerful
Kerr Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Sotto, this is a breathtakingly brilliant odyssey of emotionally candid lines embedded in immaculate rhyme schemes and imagery so incendiary it lights up the screen. A marvellous work. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 6:55 PM
Great job, Sotto. That contest seemed complicated to me but it looks like you figured it out. Love what you came up with
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:08 AM
Maybe a bit difficult for me, but I can feel the emotions and imagery in this poem.
Smith  Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 1:16 AM
Excellently contructed.
Rolland Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 5:44 PM
beauty of images and emotions, well penned, thanks poet Sotto
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Creative entry to Daniel's contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
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