'system Error'

it is there again that dreaded system error restless night ahead I'll try again in three hours will set my alarm instead
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Susan Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 7:34 PM
errors totally suck - suck all the enjoyment right out of you! can totally relate. hope it's fixed now and not giving you a hard time :)
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 7:35 AM
haha....so very true.Did u again got that error?Soupmail returned.
Falotico Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Lol. I can so relate to this as many I'm sure do. Beauty , brains and a sense of humor. Poor cab drivers didn't stand a chance. Luv and outstretched hugs to you. Michael
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:13 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Wilma. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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February 21, 2012 at 8:05 PM
ha ha! Wilma, this is a funny one..,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:48 PM
hahaha, Hey make this into sedoka and put it in the sedoka contest!!!
Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Oh, I hate when I see that system error sign. All we can do is try later. I like the way your express your angst, Wilma. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:29 PM
no fair, you are not gonna tell me what your captcha is? boohoo. haha. fine. ok waiting waiting tick tock tick tock :D lemme see if I can get it :D
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:19 PM
I re-read this again and now I am kinda laughing since you seem to be dreading that system error, haha like a monster or something... and as to the answer to your question, yup, you had me fooled. And you just had to say that why don't you?? go send it!! :D I will take a peek :D
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:14 PM
oh forgetful me O_o -- about the "deal" with that right-- nuh-uh :D --just me thinking and thinking and thinking about something and anything and nothing :D that idea just literally rushed through me, I wrote that in like 6 minutes... lol
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:15 PM
geez-- what is happening to me??! "right" I meant write!!!! I am lazy to edit my comment....forgetful and absent minded wow.
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:11 PM
what? You mean to tell me that you are having flashbacks of those system errors?? haha. You're so funny! :D I suggest you take Chris' advice below ;)
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:09 PM
ooh just want to be silly and comment on the captcha I am seeing now "akda" how cool. Since in my language, "may-akda" translates to the word author--told ya I am being silly :D
K. Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:06 PM
what system error??? Go take a nap, missy!! Me I better sleep-- mwahugs :D
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