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'system Error'

it is there again that dreaded system error restless night ahead I'll try again in three hours will set my alarm instead ©210220122100

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/1/2012 7:34:00 PM

errors totally suck - suck all the enjoyment right out of you! can totally relate. hope it's fixed now and not giving you a hard time :)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2012 7:35:00 AM

haha....so very true.Did u again got that error?Soupmail returned.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/25/2012 3:11:00 PM

Lol. I can so relate to this as many I'm sure do. Beauty , brains and a sense of humor. Poor cab drivers didn't stand a chance. Luv and outstretched hugs to you. Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 9:13:00 AM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Wilma. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 8:05:00 PM

ha ha! Wilma, this is a funny one..,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 7:48:00 PM

hahaha, Hey make this into sedoka and put it in the sedoka contest!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2012 12:44:00 PM

Oh, I hate when I see that system error sign. All we can do is try later. I like the way your express your angst, Wilma. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:29:00 PM

no fair, you are not gonna tell me what your captcha is? boohoo. haha. fine. ok waiting waiting tick tock tick tock :D lemme see if I can get it :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:19:00 PM

I re-read this again and now I am kinda laughing since you seem to be dreading that system error, haha like a monster or something... and as to the answer to your question, yup, you had me fooled. And you just had to say that why don't you?? go send it!! :D I will take a peek :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:14:00 PM

oh forgetful me O_o -- about the "deal" with that right-- nuh-uh :D --just me thinking and thinking and thinking about something and anything and nothing :D that idea just literally rushed through me, I wrote that in like 6 minutes... lol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/21/2012 12:15:00 PM

geez-- what is happening to me??! "right" I meant write!!!! I am lazy to edit my comment....forgetful and absent minded wow.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:11:00 PM

what? You mean to tell me that you are having flashbacks of those system errors?? haha. You're so funny! :D I suggest you take Chris' advice below ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:09:00 PM

ooh just want to be silly and comment on the captcha I am seeing now "akda" how cool. Since in my language, "may-akda" translates to the word author--told ya I am being silly :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 12:06:00 PM

what system error??? Go take a nap, missy!! Me I better sleep-- mwahugs :D