Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Quintain (English)

Syncope Senses -Win

Lifted is the fabulous February’s cover,
And I have seen you scantily dressed,
Now I see the buds & flowers all over,
Then by the wild winter camouflaged.
Cool breeze sends messages caressed.

Blame not if March makes me spree             
Be assured, I shall be in April amorous,
Adoring you till Midsummer Day glee
Maybe June can make me ambitious,
Dear me, July keep me quiet joyous

The adorning August may make anxious
I am not certain of sensual September,
Lest I may be way-out but courteous.
What is conceived from September,
Gestation starts from sober October.


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6th place win 
Contest any poem goes by Skat-Love

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Juliet Ligon November 12, 2013 at 9:24 PM Sensually displayed seasons. Creative write, Dr.

Bl Devnath November 11, 2013 at 11:21 AM Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Skat A November 10, 2013 at 9:27 PM Dr. ... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE

Gerard Keogh Jr. May 30, 2010 at 5:56 PM Dr. Ram, you have done it here. I really like this. It flows easy, free and unforced with honest sentiment. A keeper. Thanks and regards, Gerard

Sara Kendrick May 30, 2010 at 5:41 PM Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

May 30, 2010 at 9:55 AM What a creative trip through the seasons. Interesting use of personification. Keep that pen flowing. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Marie Harrison May 29, 2010 at 4:01 PM Sweet poem. I enjoyed.

Skat A May 28, 2010 at 6:37 PM TERZA RIMA, NEVER READ THIS FORM. SOUNDS GOOD TO ME. ENJOYED NICE MESSAGE TO YOURSELF,,SKAT

De R May 28, 2010 at 12:57 PM I was born in March...another reason for me to love your poem...great writing! Emily

Gert W. Knop May 28, 2010 at 9:04 AM Vers nicely written account of the seasons, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your ongoing comments and have a great weekend...Gert

Joseph Spence Sr May 28, 2010 at 6:17 AM This is excellent. I like the tone of the poem. The rhyming pattern keeps it flowing quite well. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Wilma Neels May 28, 2010 at 3:37 AM Unique write that tackles the months, seasons and our emotions and the diversity thereof .. Love it Dr. Ram - rgds Wilma

Daniel Cwiak May 28, 2010 at 3:09 AM Good one to remind us of the ever changing cycles that we see, feel, and find in our everday lives just by watching more closely. Great write. Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire May 27, 2010 at 11:18 PM A brilliant account of the emotions that emerge with each season, Dr. Ram. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2010 at 10:42 PM You "covered" all the months I think except November to January. Those are such dark and dreary months, I'd just as soon forget them anyway. a very unique write, Dr. Ram. And how astute of you to understand the import and purpose of the sestet of the Italian Sonnet. LUv, Andrea