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Synchronized Perfection

Synchronized Perfection 1-26-24 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Synchronized Perfection Breathe in the feathery tickle, whorls of sweet spice in synonyms, Similes that make you sneeze exhaling fresh lines of images On swirls of ink gel conceived in the passion of inspired vertigo While a joyful unbroken strand ignites hypnotic godly fires And opaque falls from enigma’s vision releasing rhythmic respirations Into blank lines and cryptic puzzles haunting insight flowing With the whimsy of grace in one, uninterrupted breath to unravel Obstacles of articulated lost verses on satin thermals of lyric grace Gliding across a flat white parchment sea of conundrums opened Riding in the groove blessed by synchronized perfection.

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Date: 2/12/2024 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/12/2024 10:06:00 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you so much for your note of congratulations! So appreciated. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this breath inhaling and exhaling our poetic inspirations! What an amazing process! Hope you are well. Our nectarine trees are blossoming. What a beautiful sight in the middle of winter! Time to spray and prune! Take care. Blessings!!
Date: 2/9/2024 7:42:00 PM
"feathery tickle", "whorls of sweet spice", "swirls of ink gel conceived in the passion of inspired vertigo" - the concept is beautifully brought out through images and metaphors. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/12/2024 10:10:00 AM
Hi Chris! So wonderful to hear from you! Thank you for your lovely note of congratulations. Delving into the breath of poetry was a delightful challenge. So glad this poem spoke to you! Take care. Sending you blessings!
Date: 2/9/2024 3:54:00 PM
My favored line "Gliding across a flat white parchment sea of conundrums open" Reminds me of a famous quote “A work of art does not answer questions, it provokes them; and its essential meaning is in the tension between the contradictory answers.” Leonard Bernstein - I adore your poem Sam. It has to be a favorite.
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:25:00 PM
This has a philosophical point to it. With imagination we can do many things....
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Date: 1/27/2024 4:07:00 PM
imagination and reality are blurred in this poem...loved the title. I especially liked: swirls of ink gel conceived in the passion of inspired vertigo
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Date: 1/27/2024 12:05:00 PM
In essence, "Breathe In the Feathery Tickle" is a testament to the transformative power of art and the enduring quest for meaning and beauty in the world. Through its lyrical language and evocative imagery, the poem invites readers to embark on a voyage of exploration and discovery, where the boundaries between imagination and reality blur and the soul finds solace in the act of creation.
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