Synchronized Perfection

Synchronized Perfection 1-26-24
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Synchronized Perfection

Breathe in the feathery tickle, whorls of sweet spice in synonyms,
Similes that make you sneeze exhaling fresh lines of images
On swirls of ink gel conceived in the passion of inspired vertigo
While a joyful unbroken strand ignites hypnotic godly fires
And opaque falls from enigma’s vision releasing rhythmic respirations
Into blank lines and cryptic puzzles haunting insight flowing
With the whimsy of grace in one, uninterrupted breath to unravel
Obstacles of articulated lost verses on satin thermals of lyric grace
Gliding across a flat white parchment sea of conundrums opened
Riding in the groove blessed by synchronized perfection.
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Kauffman Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you so much for your note of congratulations! So appreciated. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this breath inhaling and exhaling our poetic inspirations! What an amazing process! Hope you are well. Our nectarine trees are blossoming. What a beautiful sight in the middle of winter! Time to spray and prune! Take care. Blessings!!
Alex Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:42 PM
"feathery tickle", "whorls of sweet spice", "swirls of ink gel conceived in the passion of inspired vertigo" - the concept is beautifully brought out through images and metaphors. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Hi Chris! So wonderful to hear from you! Thank you for your lovely note of congratulations. Delving into the breath of poetry was a delightful challenge. So glad this poem spoke to you! Take care. Sending you blessings!
Volumes Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:54 PM
My favored line "Gliding across a flat white parchment sea of conundrums open" Reminds me of a famous quote “A work of art does not answer questions, it provokes them; and its essential meaning is in the tension between the contradictory answers.” Leonard Bernstein - I adore your poem Sam. It has to be a favorite.
Hind Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 2:25 PM
This has a philosophical point to it. With imagination we can do many things....
One Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 12:05 PM
In essence, "Breathe In the Feathery Tickle" is a testament to the transformative power of art and the enduring quest for meaning and beauty in the world. Through its lyrical language and evocative imagery, the poem invites readers to embark on a voyage of exploration and discovery, where the boundaries between imagination and reality blur and the soul finds solace in the act of creation.
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