Symptons of Love

Pale
of tenderness,
dare
unclean
affable...
Be rude to
candor...
Being stealthy
present
enthusiastic
almost childish,
encouraged inert ...
Be faithful even when cheating,
don't find out of love
astounding as it is,
be stuck in pleasure
in pleasure ... running out
be down, stand up,
be sad with faith,
heal with love,
running away from disappointments,
just love to live ...!

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Date: 9/17/2020 10:33:00 AM
Yes these are systems of love. When cheating comes in and the other person does not cheat-they should not be together. That is wen lack of trust comes into the picture. Salute Darlene xxx-oooo. My dear friend enjoy your day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2020 11:27:00 AM
Hello Alakas, Yes it is just a metaphor. yet one person in the marriage does cheat. but not right away. A few years into it. I believe two people in a marriage should be faithful. Enjoy your superb day. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Date: 9/18/2020 6:10:00 AM
Not really cheating my dearest, It is Just metaphor... enjoy your day in superb way.... xxxxoooo salute alkas
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