SYMPHONY OF THE SUNRISE

Invited by the vibrant firmament 
for a celestial spectacle
here am I yielding with exuberance
ready to behold sunrise miracles
yet was likewise divinely enthralled 
by its offered symphony …
     angelic orchestra
     renders heavenly melodies
midst kaleidoscopic blends of dawn radiance
     as harps of praises prevail
     over crescendo of worship-exaltation
while sun continually conquers the sky
with triumphant golden blaze 
      that heralds cheering allegro of jubilant hymns
     accompanying trumpets' staccato for championship march 
proving its assigned function by the sovereign Creator
as the “greater light to rule the day”---
     serenely reigning with the adagio of seraphim's harmony
     and cherubim's rhythmic hums soothingly sweet.
Oh, here am I, captivated spiritually
anticipating the coming of the “Light”* with all His glory…
and yes, thankful for this poetic prompt 
yielding this muse.

*John 8:12 Then spake Jesus again unto them, saying, I am the light of the world: he that followeth me shall not walk in darkness, but shall have the light of life.

August 25, 2024
2nd place, "Moonlight or Sunrise" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Ink Empress; judged on 9/5/2024
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write. Love your ending. I say, always be thankful. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 6:26 AM
Dear beata, i love that last line so sweet and also love the word pairing throughout this write! Sumptuous metaphors and such profound and soulfully divine imagery so well crafted throughout! Pleasure reading this gem! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for sharing this
Agustin Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Dear Ink, Wow! Thanks so much for your comments so uplifting as well as the placement. God bless you.
Kapoor Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 2:09 AM
Nice expressions and welcome of the God's light which always show us the path of glory. With best wishes... Ravindra K Kapoor
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 5:27 PM
Beata, so lovely, so wonderful! … anticipating the coming of the “Light” with all His glory… Amen!
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Beata, your poem is vividly descriptive and so inspiring. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 1:31 AM
Brilliant as the sun. Love this. God bless you friend. Much love, Gina
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