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Aug. 24, 2024       8.30am

While crimson dawn orchestrated the sky, Birds spread sweet notes at morning breeze’s rides; As sunrise calmly croons with smile on high, Rays kiss us tenderly with warmest glides. Clouds tunes magically in peaceful tones, Tree branches smooch the light in windpipe song; Mountains and hills stand tall in rhythmic thrones, As garden flowers sway with leaves along. Dew drops mingle with strings of golden shafts, Buzzing crowd preludes its rise in towns; Chats and laughter are crescendos of wafts, Sun’s sonata plays for our graces’ crowns. Rejoice with daily sunrise symphony, To make our day light, stress free and happy.

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Date: 8/24/2024 11:14:00 AM
What a lovely write with a great ending. "Good Luck"  Hugs.... Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/25/2024 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading it my dearest poet friend. Actually, my ending yesterday was different then I decided to change it at night. I don;t know if this sonnet is ok. God bless you always and good luck to you always as well. Hugs
Date: 8/24/2024 9:26:00 AM
the elevated mood and rich substance of your piece depict a morning 's ' sweet notes'... a winner this one, len!
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/24/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thanks for reading this piece of mine my dearest poetess and friend Nette. Thanks also for your uplifting words. Sana nga, tumama kahit sa baba lang, :) dear ha ha ha
Date: 8/24/2024 1:43:00 AM
refreshing. a joy to read dear poet. happy writing.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/24/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend. Blessings. Hugs

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