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Symphony of the Sunrise

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August, 17- 2024
Moonlight or Sunrise Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Ink Empress

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The deer and fawn come to the river, To quench their thirst before others quiver. The rising sun paints a dazzling view, While rays dance softly, filtering through. The mild wind whispers through leaves so green, Serenading the deer in a tranquil scene. With every note, they feel so alive, In nature's embrace, together they thrive. The deer looks back at the golden sphere, Feeling renewed, as the light draws near. Little birds chirp, big birds flap and soar, Creating a symphony, nature's encore. The trees sway gently, keeping time with grace, Their leaves applaud in this sacred space. While rivers hum along with a sweet refrain, Flowing softly, echoing dawn's gain. In this grand symphony, all life takes part, As sunrise plays its music in every heart.

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Date: 8/17/2024 9:10:00 PM
It is a serene sunrise. Deer graze peacefully, unless it's hunting season. I wish ever day was like the day in your poem.
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Date: 8/17/2024 12:44:00 PM
your poetry is so inviting calm and serene as the nature of this sweet sweet verse Jay, thank you for sharing it, have a blessed day !
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Date: 8/17/2024 11:01:00 AM
Your perfect rhymes always a joy to read, Jay they have flow and are delightful for the soul! Love the title.
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Date: 8/17/2024 10:47:00 AM
Hello Jay, a beautiful poem about nature. I enjoyed this poem. It will be my fav. Darlene/ enjoy your day my frikend.
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