Symphony

Maestro
   graceful hands
  baton rises and
         falls

   Violins to chins...
      drums roll
    cymbals crash   




           September 23, 2020
  Paint a Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest
           Sponsor: Joseph May
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Fowler Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Musical words to reminisce a bit. GL Gershon! Linda
Ashley Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 5:02 PM
Oh, I love the graceful gestures of the Maestro. I’m always amazed at how they keep everyone in line. Great sensory imagery, Gershon. Warmest wishes always, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Nice to see your avatar and real your elegant comments. Hope you are well. Missed you around here. Light and Joy, Gershon
DiMino Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Love violin, drums, cymbals -- play them all...poorly:) This is very visual, wonderful imagery. Proving again, length of a work has little, if nothing at all, to do with fullness. This is great!
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Joe. Music and Magic, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:08 AM
I am music-challenged, but this one is favorable in every way to my unlearned ears.
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:36 PM
I guess that leaves you more time for art! Here's to la artiste! :) gw
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:00 AM
- Lovely picture, Gershon :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! :) gw
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