Symphony

fast, whistling cold winds
play symphony in forest-
trees dance to its notes

7.5.2020

musicwindhaiku

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Gershon Wolf

June 17, 2020 at 3:11 PM

Melodic analogy, my friend. You've got the woodland spirit! -- or maybe the 'woodwind spirit.' Thanks, Gershon

Mohan Chutani

June 28, 2023 at 4:12 AM

belated thanx Gershon. best. Mohan.

Eve Roper

May 10, 2020 at 2:30 AM

Mohan, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Mohan Chutani

May 11, 2020 at 7:03 PM

Thanx Eve, pleasure to hear from you always. Mohan

John Watt

May 10, 2020 at 1:30 AM

Nice musical references and forest imagery. Congrats on your win ~ John

Mohan Chutani

May 10, 2020 at 2:03 AM

John, Thanx for your visit. Rgds.

Andrea Dietrich

May 9, 2020 at 9:48 PM

GREAT job, Mohan. Congrats on making the winner list.

Mohan Chutani

May 9, 2020 at 10:04 PM

Andrea, good to hear from you. Warm rgds. Mohan

Susan Ashley

May 9, 2020 at 9:20 PM

Beautiful sensory imagery, Mohan. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mohan Chutani

May 9, 2020 at 9:45 PM

Susan, thanx for your appreciation and visit. Warm regards. Mohan

Reason A. Poteet

May 9, 2020 at 2:46 PM

Nice, Mohan...love the moment. Had a similar moment last night standing on a ladder in 13 mph cold winds trying to tie down a sheet over my Japanese maple tree from the predicted 29 degree freeze. My son and I were dancing. Got up to 28 degrees this AM. I enjoyed your haiku.

Mohan Chutani

May 9, 2020 at 5:28 PM

Thanx Reason, you could relate and appreciated. Which part of the world you belong if I may ask. Best, Mohan.