Symphonic Chorus

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a night gleaming jasmine's sylphid nectar amid silvery swells of silk song-weaving soft swirls of a hypnotic aroma pervade. spirals to the milky pearl of the starry sky, whispers of rapture, a hawkmoth of passion. when stirred, he performs a rhapsody. a symphonic chorus of stardust and breaths. Written: December 11, 2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/11/2022 9:02:00 AM

Wow! I am blown away by this poem! When I write, I pick every word for precise reasons. Each word is chosen and placed. It is obvious you are that kind of poet, too, not a Stream of Consciousness sort, which is fine, but different. Your poet has a classic elegance I value. This piece is lush. Very fine penning.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 12/11/2022 8:36:00 AM

I can breathe in the sinuous peacefulness of the scenario you've described, apexing on a beautiful song of an avian entity. If world affairs were just a tad similar, then I'd say we've recreated paradise. This is simplicity in its breathtaking wonder. Great poem, Lasaad!...ab