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Symphonic Chorus

a night gleaming jasmine's sylphid nectar
amid silvery swells of silk song-weaving
soft swirls of a hypnotic aroma pervade.
spirals to the milky pearl of the starry sky,
whispers of rapture, a hawkmoth of passion.
when stirred, he performs a rhapsody.
a symphonic chorus of stardust and breaths.

Written: December 11, 2022

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Sally Eslinger December 11, 2022 at 9:02 AM Wow! I am blown away by this poem! When I write, I pick every word for precise reasons. Each word is chosen and placed. It is obvious you are that kind of poet, too, not a Stream of Consciousness sort, which is fine, but different. Your poet has a classic elegance I value. This piece is lush. Very fine penning.

Anselmo Boles December 11, 2022 at 8:36 AM I can breathe in the sinuous peacefulness of the scenario you've described, apexing on a beautiful song of an avian entity. If world affairs were just a tad similar, then I'd say we've recreated paradise. This is simplicity in its breathtaking wonder. Great poem, Lasaad!...ab