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Sympathy

I knew a man with a sailors hat
Fat and chubby, smelled like a rat
         kissed him out of stupidity,
         now he's down on one knee,
Somebody give me a baseball bat!

6-4-12

Copyright © Sandy Ivy D | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 2:17 AM

stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-) ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

December 11, 2013 at 2:13 AM

<3<3<3 PD

April 3, 2013 at 6:19 AM

Lol I like this one, good one.

August 5, 2012 at 3:05 AM

careful of the friends you keep, lovers rats n sometimes sheep, if your in New Zealand, sometimes weep, but im only joking, heaps....

June 20, 2012 at 9:46 AM

very amusing limerick grats on your placement

June 12, 2012 at 1:21 PM

Congratulations on your win!!! Terry

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 12, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Limerick Fun, Limerick Crazy" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 12, 2012 at 7:10 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Nathan's "Limerick Race" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol

June 12, 2012 at 2:43 AM

SandyIvy congrats on your great win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

June 12, 2012 at 2:20 AM

Big Congrats love it xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2012 at 9:30 PM

Congratulations, SandyIvy. It's got a cute ending of exasperation!!

June 11, 2012 at 8:45 PM

Congrats, Sandy. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

June 11, 2012 at 5:59 PM

Good one - congrats.

June 11, 2012 at 4:52 PM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your win..Sara

June 11, 2012 at 1:41 PM

Congrats on a funny limerick... :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2012 at 1:21 PM

SanID, wow! again,,,, a super congrats in my contest... I had lots of giggles reading all my entries,..xox~pd

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2012 at 12:28 PM

SANDY, CONGRATS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN,,, XOX~PD

Michelle Mac Donald

June 6, 2012 at 6:42 PM

Oie, a simple 'sail away' might work, Sandy? Sounds like he's smitten though. Best wishes, Mikki

June 5, 2012 at 8:43 AM

Nice thought

June 4, 2012 at 8:35 PM

if you can kiss a rat , you deserve that.

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