Symmetry

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May-11- 2025

Best Creative Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

~ PLACED FIRST~

Honorable Mention in Brian's Contest

heedless sky above
 clean crystal mirror below~
 vagrant clouds float through

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:32:00 PM

The words you used showed so much thought and as your title says: symmetry. Awesome

Valsa George
Date: 6/3/2025 6:30:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Andrea. Sorry for the late response as I was away on a week's tour to Bangkok and Pattaya and am just back.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2025 1:32:00 AM

- So beautiful to look at, Valsa :) - A beautiful haiku :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 5/12/2025 1:09:00 AM

How beautiful is your haiku dear valsa! I absolutely love the picture and your wordplay here too is so stunning and exquisite! Youv definitely described the ambience in such an artistic manner! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/11/2025 4:32:00 PM

I enjoy your classic haiku.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/11/2025 10:27:00 AM

Hello Valsa, this is an excellent write. Loved the picture. Good luck with the contest. Have a wonderful day.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/11/2025 5:46:00 AM

Beautiful haiku depicting a perfect summer vista. Hope you have a wonderful Sunday Valsa