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May-11- 2025
Best Creative Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich
~ PLACED FIRST~
Honorable Mention in Brian's Contest
Re entered in Seth Pina's Contest
Placed Seventh in Seth Pina's Premiere Contest~

 

symmetry

heedless sky above clean crystal mirror below~ vagrant clouds float through
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Jones Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 10:42 PM
Love the imagery! Congratulations on your placement!
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 8:32 PM
The words you used showed so much thought and as your title says: symmetry. Awesome
George Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Thanks a lot dear Andrea. Sorry for the late response as I was away on a week's tour to Bangkok and Pattaya and am just back.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 1:32 AM
- So beautiful to look at, Valsa :) - A beautiful haiku :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 1:09 AM
How beautiful is your haiku dear valsa! I absolutely love the picture and your wordplay here too is so stunning and exquisite! Youv definitely described the ambience in such an artistic manner! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 4:32 PM
I enjoy your classic haiku.
Gifford Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Hello Valsa, this is an excellent write. Loved the picture. Good luck with the contest. Have a wonderful day.
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