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Symbolism

don’t fix what’s not broken ~ unless mending mosaics as a token said the jester to a mime artist ~ he gestured back the unspoken

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Sand Blown

Date: 1/2/2024 7:47:00 PM

....nice one.....the artist's mime was the mosaic, and his gesture was his signature on his work of art.......stan

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/3/2024 5:28:00 AM

Brilliant observation Stan, I definitely wouldn’t disagree or argue against your assessment, great minds almost think alike lol! Cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/6/2023 1:26:00 PM

Everything now days seems to have to be Improved under the guise of a new improved recipe format or formula Wasn't actually really broke in the 1st place or required fixing Until current modern times where apparently everything is outdated and needs a modern new spin put on it As all the old ways of doing and viewing things are now deemed somehow to be Not nearly good enough merely just a prototype waiting to be improved upon A token of a prehistoric age or other

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/8/2023 3:45:00 PM

Runaway Train Crash Exactly scary

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/6/2023 3:04:00 PM

It’s a runaway train we’re living on now Christopher, if it stops half the world’s population can wave goodbye immediately, and if it continues to pick up pace, it looks an even worse case scenario, life of Brian is a class act, I’m not really familiar with Alan Partridge

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/6/2023 2:29:00 PM

Was just watching some Life of Brian clips 1970 I think initially that The P.F.J or J.P.F and being oppressed because denying his right to be a woman . But like Alan Partridge 2nd series ideas , Money Tennis , Youth Hosting with Chris Eubank

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/6/2023 2:22:00 PM

I genuinely do believe the times we are currently living in David. Will surely have to be eradicated and wiped from history and all records and evidence destroyed Rather than have to admit to the fact just how insanely logic defyingly stupid and the depths to which we ideolically sank and regressed as supposed intelligent human beings

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/6/2023 1:44:00 PM

Well stated Christopher, I like your take on my Monoku, how much of todays tat will still be around in 2000 years, it’s amazing that they still find Roman mosaics fully intact under fields in part of England, no cowboys in those days, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/4/2023 12:47:00 AM

I agree with Lin. Once cracked, change it. Blessings.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/4/2023 3:05:00 AM

Thanks Victor, this one’s all symbolic, I give one possible interpretation to Lin below, but I still see more, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 11/3/2023 6:00:00 PM

I’ve always been a huge proponent of leaving well enough alone. A broken mosaic tile will always be cracked. Toss it and make another. A jester and a mime communicating… envisioning that is hilarious enough without knowing what was said. Rhyming Monoku is definitely your thing.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/4/2023 4:38:00 AM

Absolutely Lin such is the complex nature of life in general, interpretation is always in the eye of the beholder, sometimes even when not ambiguous interpretations will differ, ah the vagaries of man, and woman!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/4/2023 3:35:00 AM

I saw the mosaic as a relationship. Once broken, it will never be repaired so time to move on and perhaps begin a new one. The jester is the one who broke the mosaic(marriage). Now trying to fix things but the mime, who quietly put up with the wrong doing finally finds a voice to speak up and leave. Amazing how when something is ambiguous, it can be taken in so many different directions.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/4/2023 3:00:00 AM

Several interpretations here Lin, The mosaic could well be a microcosm of our world which is pretty broken, but the most we can do is offer tokens at any given time to try make it appear whole, the mime artist is perhaps being called out for gesticulating at the problem yet doing nothing, the jester could also be me writing this in a symbolic shameful manner, and quite rightly on the receiving end of the unspoken!!! thanks so much for stopping by cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/3/2023 12:15:00 PM

Why am I laughing? Fix me! A cliché reinstated, reappointed, what is the word I'm looking for?:) flipped him the bird?

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/3/2023 2:08:00 PM

Don’t worry I also seen the possibility of (the bird) in here arising when writing lol, Thumbs up all round!

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/3/2023 1:56:00 PM

Oh, my interpretation made myself laugh, the 'gesture', my imagination took it out there. Totally--THUMBS UP!!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/3/2023 1:32:00 PM

Oh you’re cruel Anaya, so do I get thumbs up or down for my efforts lol! Cheers David

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/2/2023 11:16:00 PM

Hi David! Suoerb monoku! Read it several tines. Reminded me in its feel of Beckett’s “Waiting for Gidit,” which i deeply studied & almost memorized at one time; at core dealt with language’s dissolution into the ineffable. Not exactly sure that was simikar to ur intent here, but that’s what it felt like to me. Loved it!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/3/2023 2:06:00 AM

Heya Sally, my intent was mostly to piece this one together as a mosaic using symbolism, language, gestures, and rhyme for effect, I’m still seeing a few ramifications myself, some indeed ineffable lol, must check out, (Waiting for Godot) quotes, thanks so much for stopping by, I do hope you are keeping well, cheers David

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/2/2023 4:10:00 PM

so deep and grave, we need poetry to make us poets and human have a sweet day

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/2/2023 4:22:00 PM

Many ways to interpret this one Yann, deep and grave is fine, good to hear from you, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/2/2023 2:45:00 PM

I love this, it sank into my brain and fixed where there were gaps - perfect!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/2/2023 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Dilly, we all have those gaps in our brains, mine needed a bit of fixing too, cheers David