Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Monoku

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- Symbol of Red Power -

sweetheart, you give my heart electrical power ~ never leave me










06.02.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
10 words
16 syllables
howmanysyllables.com
Contest Sponsored by: Alexis Y.
1st place in the contest

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 1:38 PM Congrats, Sunshine. Power surge of a poem. Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2018 at 1:41 PM - Many thanks Line, for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus February 18, 2018 at 9:22 AM Pleased to return with Congratulations, Anne-Lise...Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2018 at 11:28 AM - Many thanks, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower February 16, 2018 at 10:28 PM This is a cute write, Anne-Lise. :) Congratulations! hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2018 at 11:28 AM - Many thanks, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lewis Raynes February 15, 2018 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on ur winning poem, beautiful write Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen February 16, 2018 at 1:16 AM - Many thanks Lewis, for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 15, 2018 at 12:24 PM Dropping back with my congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2018 at 12:27 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper February 14, 2018 at 7:24 PM Beautiful verse, Sunshine, congratulations on your win!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2018 at 4:07 AM - Many thanks Eve, for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham February 14, 2018 at 2:10 PM Congratulations. Sunshine Regards Tom Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 2:38 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. February 14, 2018 at 12:55 PM Hi Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY:-) ALEXIS Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 2:37 PM - Many thanks, Alexis ... it must be my lucky day :) .... P.O.T.D. ... a 1st place + a 2nd place in contest .... I have to say; WOOOW !!! - Happy Valentine's Day to you too (red roses are on my table) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. February 9, 2018 at 10:20 AM A sweet poem, Anne-Lise. Roses are red, and your pen is true blue. Must be the lover in you. Mighty fine monoku. Love and smiles always. Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2018 at 12:25 PM - Thanks Freddie, for the lovely comment :) ... glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 9, 2018 at 7:27 AM No man in his right mind will ever let you go my romantic friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2018 at 12:23 PM - Thanks for sweet comments and friendly visits, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day February 8, 2018 at 11:44 PM Very romantic - beautiful piece! Jesse Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2018 at 12:22 PM - Thank you very much, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy February 8, 2018 at 3:13 PM Short but so very sweet! Beautifully expressed, Anne-Lise! Hugs and best wishes! Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2018 at 12:20 PM - Thanks Melissa, for the lovely comment ... glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser February 8, 2018 at 12:58 PM Love is like lightening, for sure! Lovely pen, Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2018 at 12:19 PM - Powerful, Laura :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2018 at 12:09 PM Love is charged with electricity one can actually feel! Lovely monoku. Happy Valentine's Day Anne-Lise! : ) Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 12:23 PM - Thank you for your lovely wishes and great comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie February 8, 2018 at 10:33 AM roses are red, reefer is green, kiss mary's rosey lips, same old routine....lol....and your words are as Beautiful as a sunshine smile anne....;) Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 12:24 PM - Thank you for your lovely comment Eric, highly appreciated it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy February 8, 2018 at 9:12 AM Alluring and sweet, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 12:22 PM - Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus February 8, 2018 at 4:31 AM Beautiful....supercharged love!! Love the red roses, too:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 4:34 AM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem, Paul ... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2018 at 8:11 PM Awesome!! Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 3:09 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 7, 2018 at 3:45 PM Giving love a jolt..Wonderful haiku Anne...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 3:09 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Edward Lee Sr. February 7, 2018 at 12:19 PM Grand piece, blessings. Good luck in the contest James Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 1:09 PM - Thank you for your great wishes and lovely comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta February 7, 2018 at 12:04 PM Written beautifully indeed, Sunshine ... Best wishes for the contest ... Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 1:07 PM - Probir, thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan February 6, 2018 at 11:49 PM Such a cute one liner... Good luck in the contest.... Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment Supraja, glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter February 6, 2018 at 5:42 PM Love your lines. You've got Valentine's day in your heart, I think. Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 1:04 PM - I have love in my heart ... Valentine day is not so "BIG" here in Norway :) - Thanks for the lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael February 6, 2018 at 4:17 PM And keep the generators going too... Good love vibes...All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 1:01 PM - If the heart stops ... I have power :) - Thank you, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit February 6, 2018 at 3:05 PM Sweet and potent at the same time..well done, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2018 at 12:58 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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