Symbiosis

Lazy content smile,
That you flash at me in bed,
Speaks our depthless love unsaid.
Soft anemone,
entwined to a hermit crab,
Symbiotic souls are wed!


Sedoka contest
08/April 2020
Sponsor Edward Ibeh

Sedoka 5,7,7 5,7,7
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ibeh Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 5:24 PM
A remarkable sedoka, Krish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 2:00 AM
Thanks Edward. Also thank you for hosting a very good contest based on varied themes. Regards
Somadas Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Symbiotic souls are wed.. Great write Krish.. Congrats..
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 1:19 AM
Thank you Jenish! Appreciate your kind words.
Faulkner Avatar
April 11, 2020 at 10:01 PM
So I suppose you"re the hermit crab? This is so heartfelt, congratulations on placing in the contest, Krish!
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:59 AM
Thanks Michelle. The two are a great example of symbiosis.
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