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Swords and Sorceress Fantasia

The young woman sat astride the young buffalo
Her dress was a flimsy, homemade from the cured skin of a deer.
Two cured boots, quite wide, hiding each a dagger,
Whilst on her back, crisscrossed were two swords.
One large and heavy, the other lithe, small with a green gem.

They came to a murky river, the small buffalo 
Treading the depth of the bottom full of weeds.
Suddenly it stopped.  Two dark hulks of a man
Were beating a poor and small old man.

It was clear they meant to kill, such was their force.
A dagger appeared from her boot and flew
It was embedded in his chest, right where his heart lay.
The other man tried to escape, but out came the small sword.
A flash hit him between his eyes, blinding him completely.
Then he fell, trembled in his death throes and lay still.

Birds flew away from the scene, and all was quiet.
The buffalo crossed the river and approached the man.
There was no fear in his eyes as he handed back her dagger.
She picked him up, not much of a weight really.
Slowly, they wended their way towards his shack.

A few well-chosen leaves cured his wounds. 
And made him rest on his bed made of clothes.
Later, fearlessly, she fed him to regain his rest.
She cleaned her swords and prepared to leave.
The old man hobbled towards her bracelet in his hand.
“Take this.  When it turns red, you’ll know. 
Danger is not far away.  Be prepared.”
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Edmonds  Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 7:52 AM
A wonderful story/poem in free verse Victor, the lady did well, and the buffalo too… Beryl
Rolland Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 2:42 AM
splendid poem, i love the final message, the images are impressive, thanks poet
Chiri Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:54 PM
Your imaginative creativity always has and always will be some of my favorite piece Victor so you keep on writing with that kinda mindset and I’ll be happy! And you will be my favorite!:)
Hawley Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Nice story! Thank you for sharing with us.
Hind Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 7:04 PM
An interesting story- I admire their culture.
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:26 AM
What a great storyteller you are, Victor. What inspired you with these unique narratives?
George Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Dear Victor, your imagination is so fertile. What a wonderful story! Both the lady and the old man seem to share some magical powers. Quite an interesting read.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:57 AM
WOW!!!  What a creative write/story/picture you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Yes, always Be prepared... Have a fun day writing away.........
Gentile Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Victor, your imagery is splendid and vivid! Heroism always makes a great subject and your story is no exception, A pleasure to read! Happy Monday!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 4:05 AM
Creative work that was alluring to read. I don't know if it is for a contest or not, if so, it reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Sara K
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