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lost in delusion swept up by the winds of time what's left under the veneer but a lingering longing that haunts without guiles or prejudice walking through the desert of my mind singed past blurry sunsets over yonder burnt horizons swoooosh ~ AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on September 22, 2021

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Date: 9/24/2021 8:08:00 AM
The winds of time eventually sweep us all away, nicely done...Delice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/24/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Delice ~
Date: 9/22/2021 3:13:00 PM
Hello Lin, swish! I have gotten my feet wet. Enjoyed this poem.Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Hello Lin, your welcome my friend. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene ~
Date: 9/22/2021 2:35:00 PM
Swoosh it is, just washed away.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Eve ~
Date: 9/22/2021 2:21:00 PM
Wow! Love this, Line and the pic too! Love the swoooosh at the end.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

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