Swooning Over a Fruity Rainbow

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this lusty breakfast I have for you

is creamier than my man’s smooch chew

        bowls  of gooey Fruit Loops

        gobbled with nutty scoops...

God, my K-mart cereal hunt is due!





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PD’s Cereal Limerick
By: nette onclaud






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PD’s Cereal Limerick
By: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/10/2011 7:09:00 PM
hmmmmm Light & love
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Date: 10/8/2011 4:30:00 PM
oh a fruit loops girl are u Nette luv.. my sons used to luv them when little..probably still do..haha.. good luck in the contest.. this is awesome .. and I don't like cereals much.. dairy allergy for me..oh..
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:02:00 PM
All the best Nette with this in the contest of P D, and thanks for that comment earlier,,glad you enjoyed...
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Date: 10/8/2011 7:42:00 AM
Good luck in the contest Princess Nette, with this fruity piece. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:31:00 AM
oh at first I thought you were talking porridge, ... but fruit loops, not for me;) Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/8/2011 12:30:00 AM
this was very good and makes me want some fruit loops. good luck in the contest with this gem.. Free spirit
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Date: 10/8/2011 12:06:00 AM
I'm retiring for the night...I didn't receive the second Soup Mail, if there was one. I'll check my mail when I get up in the morning.
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Date: 10/7/2011 11:37:00 PM
soup mail to ya!
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Date: 10/7/2011 10:20:00 PM
holy batsh, woman... that's one sugar high! gonna go fruit a loop on that one. Beauty weekend, sistah netteski!~N
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Date: 10/7/2011 10:19:00 PM
Love it! Yes this is a great cereal write! Way to go nette!!
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