Nette Onclaud Poet Limerick

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Swooning Over a Fruity Rainbow

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this lusty breakfast I have for you

is creamier than my man’s smooch chew

        bowls  of gooey Fruit Loops

        gobbled with nutty scoops...

God, my K-mart cereal hunt is due!





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PD’s Cereal Limerick
By: nette onclaud






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PD’s Cereal Limerick
By: nette onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi October 10, 2011 at 7:09 PM hmmmmm Light & love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 8, 2011 at 4:30 PM oh a fruit loops girl are u Nette luv.. my sons used to luv them when little..probably still do..haha.. good luck in the contest.. this is awesome .. and I don't like cereals much.. dairy allergy for me..oh..

Joe Maverick October 8, 2011 at 3:02 PM All the best Nette with this in the contest of P D, and thanks for that comment earlier,,glad you enjoyed...

James Fraser October 8, 2011 at 7:42 AM Good luck in the contest Princess Nette, with this fruity piece. Have a lovely weekend :)

Lee Ramage October 8, 2011 at 2:31 AM oh at first I thought you were talking porridge, ... but fruit loops, not for me;) Well done. Lee

Cory Long October 8, 2011 at 12:30 AM this was very good and makes me want some fruit loops. good luck in the contest with this gem.. Free spirit

Russell Sivey October 8, 2011 at 12:06 AM I'm retiring for the night...I didn't receive the second Soup Mail, if there was one. I'll check my mail when I get up in the morning.

Russell Sivey October 7, 2011 at 11:37 PM soup mail to ya!

Nancy Jones October 7, 2011 at 10:20 PM holy batsh, woman... that's one sugar high! gonna go fruit a loop on that one. Beauty weekend, sistah netteski!~N

Russell Sivey October 7, 2011 at 10:19 PM Love it! Yes this is a great cereal write! Way to go nette!!