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Swooning Over a Fruity Rainbow

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‘ ‘’’’ ‘’’ ‘ ' this lusty breakfast I have for you is creamier than my man’s smooch chew bowls of gooey Fruit Loops gobbled with nutty scoops... God, my K-mart cereal hunt is due! © --------- PD’s Cereal Limerick By: nette onclaud © PD’s Cereal Limerick By: nette onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2011 7:09:00 PM

hmmmmm Light & love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2011 4:30:00 PM

oh a fruit loops girl are u Nette luv.. my sons used to luv them when little..probably still do..haha.. good luck in the contest.. this is awesome .. and I don't like cereals much.. dairy allergy for me..oh..

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/8/2011 3:02:00 PM

All the best Nette with this in the contest of P D, and thanks for that comment earlier,,glad you enjoyed...

James Fraser

Date: 10/8/2011 7:42:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Princess Nette, with this fruity piece. Have a lovely weekend :)

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2011 2:31:00 AM

oh at first I thought you were talking porridge, ... but fruit loops, not for me;) Well done. Lee

Cory Long

Date: 10/8/2011 12:30:00 AM

this was very good and makes me want some fruit loops. good luck in the contest with this gem.. Free spirit

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/8/2011 12:06:00 AM

I'm retiring for the night...I didn't receive the second Soup Mail, if there was one. I'll check my mail when I get up in the morning.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2011 11:37:00 PM

soup mail to ya!

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/7/2011 10:20:00 PM

holy batsh, woman... that's one sugar high! gonna go fruit a loop on that one. Beauty weekend, sistah netteski!~N

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2011 10:19:00 PM

Love it! Yes this is a great cereal write! Way to go nette!!