Swirly Breezes

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Written - 23rd June 2025

Swirly breezes are just what is needed As sun continues to shine unheeded Long they’re awaited Anticipated Gentle winds are to be celebrated.

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/26/2025 3:39:00 AM

Gentle winds are to be celebrated, especially as an islander that lives in such scorching heat sometimes, i do resonate with that line dear beryl! How elegant and beautiful is the way youv woven words here! Pleasure reading! Sending you light

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/27/2025 2:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Ink, it’s been scorching here for a week or more, and we’re going to be suffering bright sunshine for many days, it’s what the weather forecast says. It must be lovely in your part of the world, keep as cool as you can… Beryl

Tom Woody

Date: 6/23/2025 5:46:00 AM

It's 90's here this week but last night sitting on my porch swing I felt those gentle breezes, a welcome respite from the heat. Nice lim

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/23/2025 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Tom, it’s been unbearable here lately, it’s cooler today I’m glad to say… Beryl