Swirls of Gold Filigree

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A pale, ghostly moon rises at night when the day is done. And orange and tangerine get bled from a crimson sun. Space is draped in black velvet, pinned with galaxies of light. And swirls of gold filigree confetti the dark of night. Twirling pulsars and quasars provide rhythm, spinning in place. And in this cosmic ballet, gravity maintains the pace. Mars ascends in shades of red; evoking passion and praise. Securing Her rightful place; Venus appears through the haze. And shooting stars fizzle out within the blink of an eye. For the kingdom of magic is as near as the night sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/25/2018 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful lines "And orange and tangerine are bled from a crimson sun". Wonderful description. Awesome poem, Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2015 7:24:00 PM
Absolutely stunning!!.. Amazing imagery, dear friend.. Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:08:00 PM
Thanks Arlene, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 1/28/2015 8:14:00 AM
Emile, you have penned a beautiful poem, well done and thanks so much for visiting one of my older poems, that was so special ~~
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:42:00 AM
Thank you for the encouragement. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2015 9:21:00 PM
Space is full of wonder and discovery, I really enjoyed your galatic pen
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2015 9:09:00 PM
A tableau of visual feast, seduction of the senses, nature and magic combine, to bring out a poem sublime...wow...I was so carried away by your piece sire, that it was inevitable to wax poetic! Thank you for the treat. A 7 and a fav..warm regards, your new friend Kim Patrice. :)
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Kim. you know how to create a smile. Emile.
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