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The leaves were changing as I walked my way, All different colors they were today. I felt a calm presence I’ve felt before. A feeling of peace I couldn’t ignore. Colorful leaves fell from the tall oak trees, The flowers were alive with buzzing bees. The life in nature seemed a part of me. The creation from God for all to see. I saw the Creator, through creation. A woven spectacle of interrelation. Colors blended without hesitation, Brought a feeling of exhilaration. Every year they fall before the first freeze, Soon they will be escorted by the breeze. Slowly loosening their grip from the trees, I must dance and twirl with the swirling leaves.

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Date: 6/27/2025 9:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem about the beauty of nature and the positives affects it has on us humans! Just lovely Bill my dear friend! Debx
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Date: 6/28/2025 11:11:00 AM
Nice comforting to hear from a true friend, Deb. You are priceless to me and Sara. Hugs, Bill
Date: 6/27/2025 4:12:00 PM
Very interesting!
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Date: 6/27/2025 5:13:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Abdullah. Have a great week! Bill

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