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Swirling In Winter's Flurry Premiere Contest Winner

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Gently, they swirled about in Winter's frigid wind No two were identical, none were ever twinned Each ice crystal, a pristine beauty transcending Tumbling from clouded gray skies, softly descending * * * * * * I frolicked among them, as amused as a child Infused with wonderment and totally beguiled Tree limbs brocaded, deeply embellished with snow So beautifully they glistened with lucent glow * * * * * How quickly it gathered on rooftops and hedges Wafting, free-spirited, collecting on ledges Down, they continued twirling in a tranquil scene Etched in memory as idyllic and serene * * * * I was enamored and enthralled as it drifted Toward heaven, my eyes were gratefully lifted As each flake so elegantly fell to the ground Creating a dreamscape without making a sound * * * Like dainty birds, they fluttered in such a hurry a flock of crystal snowflakes, in Winter's flurry My world was blanketed by a quilt of pure white Tonight it would sparkle brilliantly in starlight! * * * December 10, 2020 Winter Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/25/2021 11:13:00 AM
What a beautiful picture you have created Jenna with a multitude of creative images. This is elegant poetry. Thank you for taking us with you as you walk through this lovely, gentle scene. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/3/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much for such wonderful comments, Sam.
Date: 1/24/2021 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenna. Many congrats on your fine win. ~ Elaine
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/24/2021 8:32:00 AM
Hi Elaine, and thank you very much for visiting with your kind thoughts.
Date: 1/9/2021 10:32:00 PM
Wow Jenna, the magnificence of the painted scene you created with your words leaves one in awe! You definitely deserved your wonderful trophy! Congratulations! I wish you the best in this new year. I am putting this gem into my faves! Bravo! Blessings xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2021 2:54:00 AM
Hi, Connie. I very much appreciate the generosity of your compliments and the favor bestowed on this poem. Thanks so much.
Date: 1/8/2021 2:37:00 PM
I cant believe i missed this exquisite gem before Jenna, its no wonder you have a trophy by it, many congrats you are such a talented young lady for sure:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2021 2:53:00 AM
Jan, you haven't missed a thing. You're reading it now...before the snow has melted. lol Thank you very much.
Date: 1/7/2021 11:28:00 PM
This is one that brought memories of living in N.Y.City and Forest Hill Gardens. Snow landing here and there, Fantastic...CONGRATS
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2021 2:52:00 AM
Thank you, Barbara, for your generous remarks.
Date: 1/7/2021 10:29:00 AM
That's feels very very cold and snowy.... Beautifully painted.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/10/2021 2:51:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Curie.
Date: 1/3/2021 4:06:00 PM
Jenna, a beautifully penned winter poem, congratulations on your trophy win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:46:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind thoughts, Tania.
Date: 1/3/2021 11:32:00 AM
Well done Jenna, whenever possible I sneak out into the snowfall and just settle into being a kid again
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:45:00 AM
It just brings out the child in us...you're right. It's been a few years since I've played in the snow. Thank you, John.
Date: 1/3/2021 9:30:00 AM
This is simply beautiful, - a breathtaking work from your brilliant and enchanting pen... I love it so much!! WOW... I'm in awe. This definitely deserved it's top win. God bless you always my friend
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:45:00 AM
Your compliments are sincerely appreciated. Thanks, Regina.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 1/3/2021 9:31:00 AM
too.. this is a fave for me
Date: 1/3/2021 9:05:00 AM
Beautifully written Jenna! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:44:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Linda.
Date: 1/3/2021 8:34:00 AM
This is lovely, Jenna! Congratulations on your first-place win in Emile's contest!! Way to go...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:44:00 AM
Thank you for the congratulations, Carolyn.
Date: 1/3/2021 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem has placed "First" in my contest. This was a hard contest to judge, the quality of the poems entered were outstanding, but yours rose to the top, you should be proud of your work, it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:43:00 AM
It was my pleasure to write for your contest, and I'm honored to have placed so high. Thank you so very much, Emile.
Date: 1/3/2021 7:53:00 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, dear Jenna. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Elaine.
Date: 12/17/2020 5:54:00 AM
Snowflakes are truly amazing. Isn't it just incredible how God has created so many wondrous and beautiful things for us. Masterfully written!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:19:00 AM
Yes, Mark, incredible and amazing are His gifts to us. Thank you for your complimentary thoughts.
Date: 12/13/2020 10:47:00 AM
Your Winter blanket of glittering soft snow flakes will always sparkle for you because you see it through sparkling eyes, good luck my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/14/2020 3:50:00 AM
What sweet comments, Jennifer. Thank you so very sincerely.
Date: 12/10/2020 4:39:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Jenna, I can picture the snowy scene you’ve created with your written words. You amaze me... Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/11/2020 2:46:00 AM
A big thank you for such generous thoughts, Belle.
Date: 12/10/2020 12:18:00 PM
You have described the snowy scene beautifully Jenna, Well written...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/10/2020 3:44:00 PM
I really appreciate your time for reading and leaving such nice comments, Joseph.

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