Premiere Contest WinnerSwirling In Winter's Flurry

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Gently, they swirled about in Winter's frigid wind No two were identical, none were ever twinned Each ice crystal, a pristine beauty transcending Tumbling from clouded gray skies, softly descending * * * * * * I frolicked among them, as amused as a child Infused with wonderment and totally beguiled Tree limbs brocaded, deeply embellished with snow So beautifully they glistened with lucent glow * * * * * How quickly it gathered on rooftops and hedges Wafting, free-spirited, collecting on ledges Down, they continued twirling in a tranquil scene Etched in memory as idyllic and serene * * * * I was enamored and enthralled as it drifted Toward heaven, my eyes were gratefully lifted As each flake so elegantly fell to the ground Creating a dreamscape without making a sound * * * Like dainty birds, they fluttered in such a hurry a flock of crystal snowflakes, in Winter's flurry My world was blanketed by a quilt of pure white Tonight it would sparkle brilliantly in starlight! * * * December 10, 2020 Winter Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
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Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 11:13 AM
What a beautiful picture you have created Jenna with a multitude of creative images. This is elegant poetry. Thank you for taking us with you as you walk through this lovely, gentle scene. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Thank you so very much for such wonderful comments, Sam.
George   Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenna. Many congrats on your fine win. ~ Elaine
Logan Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Hi Elaine, and thank you very much for visiting with your kind thoughts.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Wow Jenna, the magnificence of the painted scene you created with your words leaves one in awe! You definitely deserved your wonderful trophy! Congratulations! I wish you the best in this new year. I am putting this gem into my faves! Bravo! Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:54 AM
Hi, Connie. I very much appreciate the generosity of your compliments and the favor bestowed on this poem. Thanks so much.
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:37 PM
I cant believe i missed this exquisite gem before Jenna, its no wonder you have a trophy by it, many congrats you are such a talented young lady for sure:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Jan, you haven't missed a thing. You're reading it now...before the snow has melted. lol Thank you very much.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 11:28 PM
This is one that brought memories of living in N.Y.City and Forest Hill Gardens. Snow landing here and there, Fantastic...CONGRATS
Logan Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:52 AM
Thank you, Barbara, for your generous remarks.
Stark Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 10:29 AM
That's feels very very cold and snowy.... Beautifully painted.
Logan Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:51 AM
Thanks so very much, Curie.
Kitchin Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Jenna, a beautifully penned winter poem, congratulations on your trophy win!
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:46 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind thoughts, Tania.
Lawless Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Well done Jenna, whenever possible I sneak out into the snowfall and just settle into being a kid again
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:45 AM
It just brings out the child in us...you're right. It's been a few years since I've played in the snow. Thank you, John.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:30 AM
This is simply beautiful, - a breathtaking work from your brilliant and enchanting pen... I love it so much!! WOW... I'm in awe. This definitely deserved it's top win. God bless you always my friend
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:45 AM
Your compliments are sincerely appreciated. Thanks, Regina.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:31 AM
too.. this is a fave for me
Fowler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Beautifully written Jenna! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:44 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Linda.
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:34 AM
This is lovely, Jenna! Congratulations on your first-place win in Emile's contest!! Way to go...
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:44 AM
Thank you for the congratulations, Carolyn.
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem has placed "First" in my contest. This was a hard contest to judge, the quality of the poems entered were outstanding, but yours rose to the top, you should be proud of your work, it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:43 AM
It was my pleasure to write for your contest, and I'm honored to have placed so high. Thank you so very much, Emile.
George   Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, dear Jenna. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
Logan Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:41 AM
Thank you very much, Elaine.
Koplin Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 5:54 AM
Snowflakes are truly amazing. Isn't it just incredible how God has created so many wondrous and beautiful things for us. Masterfully written!
Logan Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 4:19 AM
Yes, Mark, incredible and amazing are His gifts to us. Thank you for your complimentary thoughts.
Proxenos Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Your Winter blanket of glittering soft snow flakes will always sparkle for you because you see it through sparkling eyes, good luck my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 3:50 AM
What sweet comments, Jennifer. Thank you so very sincerely.
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December 10, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Absolutely beautiful Jenna, I can picture the snowy scene you’ve created with your written words. You amaze me... Belle
Logan Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:46 AM
A big thank you for such generous thoughts, Belle.
May Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 12:18 PM
You have described the snowy scene beautifully Jenna, Well written...
Logan Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 3:44 PM
I really appreciate your time for reading and leaving such nice comments, Joseph.
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