Swirling In the Depth of the Shadow Land

swirling in the depth of the shadow land
A twirling blizzard of unrest,
chaos firmly in place

i felt lost,
bereft, alone,
until a hand reached out
pulling me in


a comfort
immediate
relief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 2:38 AM
Brilliant you are saved, the poetry powerful..love it.
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January 23, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thank you very much Harry.
Smith Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Well done Caren...
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January 23, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Charlie. I saw an abstract painting with a tiny hand reaching toward me.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 12:35 PM
So wonderful, Caren!
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January 23, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Kim.
Poet Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Good one!Is this for a contest?
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January 22, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you. Yes for another poetry site.
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