Swirling

Enchanted upon a moonlit night
eyes of my lover are bright
captured his essence pulled delicately
in that moment we connected endlessly
Yet two years later within passion's thrust
the love can easily turn to raging lust
Anger mingles with love
and draws us into it
the things I've said
I wish I didn't .
But the passion wraps us in ribbons
of seductive nights by firelight
amid the twilight
Why can't this darkest midnight
not ever end?
Instead of sending us swirling 
into the depths of illusions 
misplaced once again
Where we are left hanging
and dangling from the ledge
between heartbreak and sadness 
and ultimate gladness and then..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/27/2012 9:29:00 PM
* Afore Slipping Back Up Top To Reread This Your Beauty's Latest Piece In Beautiful's Poetic Art, Sweet Beautiful Juniper. I Must Always Say What An Honour And A Joy, Whenever Being So Blessed As To Hear From, The Beauty Of Your Splendours. Seven For Seven, O' Thank Heaven. Trying To Gather The Words, Beautiful Juniper, In Describing Or Expressing The Depth Of Emotions Your Poetry Brings About As It Swims Inside The Sea. Waters Blue, Tis The Beauty Of You. 'A Masterpiece.' My Love, Rachel *
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