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Swirling

Two strife torn lovers adrift in a boat enveloped by circling currents torn by dark separation the fragile veil of words exploding into tears and threats emotions like storm breaking silence separating two worlds turbulence fills the boat nothing left to say the boat drifts towards the rapids unattended Unattended the boat drifts towards the rapids nothing left to say turbulence fills the boat silence separating two worlds emotion like storm breaking into tears and threats exploding the fragile veil of words torn by dark separation enveloped by circling currents two strife torn lovers adrift in a boat

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/6/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 11:00:00 PM

darrel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/26/2009 5:51:00 AM

Wow. Awesome the way you reversed this and it worked so well. The storm of a relationship often so traumatic, extremely well penned. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2009 7:52:00 PM

Wow, Darrell! I love the way these lovers experience such strong emotions while "adrift." I like the way you weave your story!