Swirled

I put up the barriers and molded the Great White Stone.
I searched all written doctrines that embodied my light.
It was a remarkable journey let me tell you of my flight.
I even went through DNA of every strand of every bone.
 
I matched all the genetic linage to kind energies ingrown.
It was like an open door after door where all turns bright.
The misplacement that followed is truly way out of sight.
Seeing it all made me search my truth and I wasn’t alone.
 
I felt like I am the only one.
There was just me to believe.
There was too much undone.
More than humans conceive.
 
This was an origin unknown and not of this world.
This is timeless intelligence appropriately swirled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Love the last two lines here, Ann ... beautiful writing !!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 3:01 AM
Ann, It sounds like you have done a LOT of pondering about God and creation. The topic is one that consumed me for many years. Perhaps you would enjoy reading a little bit more on the subject. The links follow! http://assets.redbubble.com/people/daneann/writing/3479742-bridging-the-gap-between-science-and-religion-the-hypothesis/comments.atom DID IT TAKE YOU THERE? There's more! I hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed your beautifully written poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Freeman Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Ann, Very good, certainly not of this world, for sure. Certainly it is in every DNA of everything manifest. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Searching for answers of our uniqueness doesn't reveal much except that I am unique one of a kind there has never been another and never will be another just like me whew. Keep writing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:43 PM
interesting write, thanks for sharing your works!
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