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Swirl With Me

my love, stay gently wild

and foxtrot with me

to swirl in flaming dips

of night… heavenly!



6/5/6/5/syl count
Giorgio V's Laconic Contest
by nette onclaud

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Sara Kendrick

December 5, 2013 at 11:15 AM

Way to go!!!Sara

Len Gasun

December 1, 2013 at 3:17 AM

A very lovely and splendid poem! So love it. Biggest hearty congratulations my very dear friend Nette! It's an honor sharing with you this wonderful win! Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2013 at 9:35 PM

this is a gorgeous little poem, Nette. BIg congrats on your win.

Juliet Ligon

November 30, 2013 at 6:18 PM

So romantic, Nette. Congrats!

Roger Horsch

November 30, 2013 at 10:09 AM

What a wonderful poem, Congratulations on your win....Roger

Suzanne Delaney

November 30, 2013 at 12:20 AM

Nette: ....a wonderful moment captured ....a real art piece. Congratulations, SuZ

Mark Peterson

November 29, 2013 at 11:21 AM

So lovely in its lilt and flow. I think I'll put on some music and dance. Congrats on top honors.

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 29, 2013 at 4:51 AM

Congrats on the win, nette

Liam Mcdaid

November 23, 2013 at 8:26 AM

very beautifully drawn

Joe Maverick

November 22, 2013 at 1:38 PM

Interesting twist on the general perception from this one Nette, thank you for the inquiriy about myself..'

Harry Horsman

November 22, 2013 at 11:37 AM

your visual poetry, sends the mind into overdrive

Carl Fraser

November 21, 2013 at 6:33 PM

Beautiful Nette, Love is just a continual dance isnt it. Blessings Carl

Manny Paras

November 21, 2013 at 3:41 PM

Delicately delicous ride with every twist and turn. This has hints of seduction yet classy in how it sways.

John Loving Iii

November 21, 2013 at 1:02 PM

a dancer i see.

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2013 at 6:28 AM

Ahhh!!! Great work..Very expressive and passionate..Thanks for stopping by..I am good..Sara

Dinda Minardi

November 21, 2013 at 3:03 AM

hellooo Nette.. how have u been? What a wonderful poem, always elegant and powerful.. such a great poet you are.. xoxo

Daniel Port

November 20, 2013 at 2:24 PM

Tenderly romantic I go zzzzzzziing over this poem. You are the best epitome of passion, love, and romace in this place.You can breeze through the range of sensuality without blunt exposition.Which leaves me imagining the fire within. Elegant heat like no other!