Deborah Burch Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star Tankas-3

“Swinging on A Star”-1

Oh “Bethlehem Star” 
Bright multi-faceted points
Still shimmer from far
Above my old aching joints
Reminding me of His love.

deborah burch©
07/22/2012

“Swinging On A Star”-2

Diamonds on blue
Yours glimmering by the moon
Is “Venus”…still true...
Holding your heart, as I croon
Sweet love songs in moonbeam hues.

deborah burch©
07/22/2012

“Swinging On A Star”-3

Catching golden love,
These moonbeams in a jar,
You watch from above
As if swinging on a star--
My "Mem'ry”…my love…you are. 

deborahburch©
07/22/2012

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Harry Horsman February 3, 2013 at 5:24 AM these are wonderful Tankas, as i browse through your oldies...glad i did...

Russell Sivey July 22, 2012 at 2:37 PM I like the last Tanka the best! It shows off a better display of love in my view! Great compilation of poems my friend! You've done an excellent job! Awesome Work!! Deborah Burch July 22, 2012 at 2:51 PM thank you dear Russell...:) hope you are well...love ya, deb