Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Swinging On a Star

How bright the sky is
I will bring it close to you
pick a star......any
we will swing on that 'Love's nest'
sun and moon will look at us.

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By:kash poet

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Gail Debole August 25, 2012 at 6:58 PM Enjoyed the imagery. Congratulations on your win!

Dinda Minardi August 8, 2012 at 1:42 AM sun and moon will look envy, i bet. hahaha. very sweet as always.

Joseph May August 2, 2012 at 9:17 AM nicely done Kash...congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 7:32 PM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 1, 2012 at 5:57 PM A beautiful poem Kash I knew would be on the winners list. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams August 1, 2012 at 3:09 PM Kash, congrats on your win...very romantic write...David

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 12:38 AM CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2012 at 11:46 PM whoa.. i am starry-eyed, kashi bud... whooping congrats on your win!..:) hugggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 8:10 PM congrats Kash on a top ten win for a top notch starry entry luv..

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2012 at 11:20 AM i know you some more lined up... i wanna read you again, bud!..:) huggs!

Harry Horsman July 25, 2012 at 4:00 AM love the concept of this wonderful Tanka, Kash. harry

Nette Onclaud July 24, 2012 at 12:53 PM i did it already, bud...yeow, i had a few recent ones i forgot to enter... thanks for the heads up!...huggles!

Matthew Anish July 24, 2012 at 10:29 AM Good cosmic poetry here! And good use ot the form! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2012 at 9:33 AM Ahh! Romantic at heart...Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 24, 2012 at 8:57 AM awwwight, kashi buddy!.. i am swooning!... swing it!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2012 at 6:23 AM Lovely and sweet poem kash - luck in contest for you ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Richard Palmer July 24, 2012 at 6:09 AM nice write Kash,good luck

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 23, 2012 at 11:38 PM Lovely, Kash! A winner, I'm sure. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2012 at 9:14 PM This is REALLY sweet. I love it, Kash. soupmail.

Richard Craig July 23, 2012 at 4:32 PM sweet

Tanya Harrington July 23, 2012 at 2:01 PM Great Tanka! Best wishes for the contest! :) Tanya

Russell Sivey July 23, 2012 at 12:58 PM This is a wonderful piece my friend! Great write for the contest! I really liked the line, "sun and moon will look at us." a very peaceful line there! Great Work!!