Swimming With the Stars

Sometimes I feel
I have the Omen upon me,
I am the Earth
and lava it burns through to the core
and so in the darkness of space
I will exist to drown
beneath the stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Abbey-Mensah Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Wow... Interesting piece you have here... You indeed are swimming with the stars,,,, Great write... I absolutely love it.. Thanks for your comment on my poem
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:55 AM
o your shining with this one not drowing Luv*Skat
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