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Swimming Pool

Tourist Hotel´s Pool The swimming pool at the hotel is empty guests are having supper. On limpid water two big yellow balls float asleep after being thrown about all day. Around the pool deep green artificial grass, and a ditto tree that sheds no leaf. Nature has been recreated. No fish will ever swim in a pool that has blue tiles at its bottom to pretend to be the real sea that is a few miles away. Except for insecticide and chlorine there is no aroma other than the smell of nothing. so sterile, so insipid, so dead. But wait, a young couple might swim here late at night, make love and their juices might mingle, bring a renewal, to this oasis of sterility. But perhaps not, I see a sign telling bathers: “Smile you are on camera.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
Too much bacteria waiting to get in (human and otherwise)..
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/6/2013 3:47:00 AM
indeed my dear, just back from Porto in Portugal, only took with me the notebook and a pen nice weather summer weather up north not too hot. my notebook is full of observations made, now I have to try make sense what I have written so I will start with the last poem the one I wrote before living in the morning.

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