Swimming In Poetry's Ocean

Im out swimming in the ocean 
looking like moss in this giant bubbly green potion 
Fading in the dark awoken 
in this life ship motion 
Sailing all the se7en seas literally in this poetic land of the soul called free
 we ain't free we locked out until we locked in like some G'z 
I just want something better 
yet Im still swimming in the sea....so things are even wetter 
I write life until death so what you read could be my last letter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Visiting your poem today Travis - it was enjoyable to read it - a poem that I liked very much - thank you for sharing it with me. Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Komala Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 9:37 AM
lovely... thank you Travis for sharing your nice work..enjoyed !!! :) SK <3
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