Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Swimmies In My Broth

The cleaning ladies are here today oh boy!
We'll soon get through the rubble oh joy!
It's like a bomb went off
There's swimmies in my broth
Doing the backstroke and yelling ahoy! center>

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Judith S December 28, 2017 at 12:45 PM ewwwwhhhh Jack Ellison December 28, 2017 at 12:56 PM Some things are yukky eh... it ain't all rises and sunshine!!! Love from the frozen!!! north Miss Judith xxxxxxxx!!!

Silent One December 28, 2017 at 8:48 AM Jack said hey cleaning lady, won't ya come kiss me??? That made em mad, but what was bad, they stuck him on top of the Xmas tree! Jack Ellison December 28, 2017 at 8:55 AM Oh those cleaning ladies, they can clean my clock any time, if you know what I mean... wink wink!!!

Silent One December 28, 2017 at 8:46 AM Haha... Are they pretty cleaning ladies? Quick go find that mistletoe! Jack Ellison December 28, 2017 at 8:50 AM Don't need mistletoe... I have to fight them off! Get exhausted... ain't a young stud anymore!!!

Lim'Rik Flats December 28, 2017 at 7:52 AM Reminds me, I've got stubble//I'd shave, but it's too much trouble//A desert rat//doesn't give a shat//Goes feral, sometimes double! STROKE ON JACK SPITZ!!! Jack Ellison December 28, 2017 at 8:48 AM Are you thinking of challenging me in a beard growing contest??? I've got years of experience up on you!!! 55 tears to b exact!!! GOOD LUCK JJ!!!