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Swim Suits & Suntans

as the sun beats down
beaches start beaming with life
hot beautiful days

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Shirin Neshat

Date: 7/26/2009 3:46:00 AM

nicely put togather.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2009 2:03:00 PM

recomment-thanks friend,you re too kind to me,and regarding you write here,the sun is beating down in my country so warm and loving andthis just got me in a good mood-i love the sun---and the beach-----charma

Date: 4/25/2009 9:15:00 AM

This one has be smiling. Love those beach days. Sounds like someone dropped a wonderful gift on your porch. Now, you just have to fill them with plants. Nice surprises sure brighten one's day. Thank you for you comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessings to you. Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/24/2009 8:13:00 AM

Check out Negril, Jamaica, now ... O to be there in Montego Bay now, and hear calypso whoring for tourist dollars on the quay, and smell the white rum from far away ... you invoke a lot of memories, brother.

Brian Strand

Date: 4/24/2009 12:05:00 AM

Love that alliteration in your title.We have a had some of your Californian sun this week.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/23/2009 10:46:00 PM

Oh yes, I can hardly stand the wait. The best part for me is watching my children as their faces light up with pleasure. Great writing... it is amazing how many pictures flow from so few words. Smiles from Lolita

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/23/2009 5:41:00 PM

Beautiful images here, I can see it so clearly, everyone taking off into the water, waves rusnhing in and out, kids building castles in the sand...A Sweet summer treat is taking a trip to the beach..Nice one Michael!! Always, Tyesha

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/23/2009 4:33:00 PM

wonderfully done my friend..I can feel the breeze kissing my face.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/23/2009 4:18:00 PM

That song with the lines "Hot fun in the summertime..." popped right into my head! You captured summer! Love it! Love, Shar