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Image result for pictures of weeping willow tree's buds in spring fog

swift creek fog rise
winter sunbeams steak through gray....
willow tree's buds pop

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/12/2019 1:06:00 PM

perfectly described, my friend - i can see this so well

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/17/2019 12:56:00 AM

I have a perfect image in my mind of this scene - well penned Sara, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/17/2019 6:09:00 AM

Jennifer, Thanks for the visits to my page. I appreciate the time reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:08:00 PM

Nicely described, Sara.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/13/2019 1:51:00 PM

love the picture I get here

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2019 5:25:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by .. The fog has had a eerie sort of feel to it for about a month now. Sara

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/12/2019 4:34:00 PM

Very beautiful imagery in your excellent haiku, Sara! I really enjoyed this poem. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2019 4:54:00 PM

Laura, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 12:41:00 PM

Perhaps you are describing the recent fog you've had, Sara. Your reference to the winter rays streaking through gray is lovely. Quite a beautiful haiku and the photos are nicely matched too! Best wishes, carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2019 4:53:00 PM

Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by. Your comments are refreshing. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/9/2019 2:17:00 PM

Oh I can hardly wait for that day! A beautifully penned Haiku. Thanks for the vision.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2019 3:08:00 PM

M.L., Yes, spring would be a nice change. We are having pollen showing up already. It makes me sick so I am feeling somewhat ill from it so early in the season. Thanks for stopping by. Sara