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White rapids rushing for the falls, Morgan horses loosed from their stalls, From fragrant sunsets to nightfalls, Songbirds answering southern calls. Precious moments of golden hours, Butterflies midst cherry flowers, Rainbow's appearance with colors, Sun and silver moon encounters, The time it takes for love to grow, The time it takes for winds to blow, Shooting star in a night's solo, At twilight of sunset's sorrow!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/26/2020 7:32:00 PM

Imagery - vivid, vibrant. Romance -- permeates each stanza. Rhythm and Rhyme -- flows like wine. Judge's decision: FAVE! FAVE! FAVE! ... Just gorgeously penned, Evelyn. Thank you for the privilege of reading this superlative poem. Dawn and Delight, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/26/2020 8:02:00 PM

And a delightful dawn to you too, Gershon! Your words truly lift me up! I can't thank you enough for the smile you've put on my face, and I am happy as can be to have a poem in your FAVES. Be blessed, my friend. :=)