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Swept Away

a hand   a heart      lain   dance down    within the half-beats        hushed waltzing with the night sultry holding tight       flushed movements ever right vision's drift at play       lovers passion swept away

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Date: 9/30/2017 8:44:00 AM
Good Morning Tim - This entry is lovely and is very much Free Verse in true fashion with expression. Well done completely. I loved the title by the way. May this day find you well.
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Date: 9/28/2017 9:03:00 AM
lain hushed flushed lovers... lovely my friend :)
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Date: 9/28/2017 8:47:00 AM
- A wind of feelings, Tim ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:44:00 PM
<3 Beautiful Tim <3
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:09:00 PM
This is lovely, Tim!
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:42:00 PM
Oh this reminds me of some of your older poems! Great write!
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Date: 9/27/2017 3:37:00 PM
A nice flowing poem Tim! A joy to read today :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 3:29:00 PM
Such beautiful and sultry imagery Tim:-) I'm swept away in a wave of emotions:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/27/2017 2:16:00 PM
Oh yes! I really felt this one Tim. Beautifully expressed.
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Date: 9/27/2017 1:44:00 PM
Hi Tim, I found this write to be filled with passion, intoxicating and romantic. I enjoyed every bit of it. Well done:-) Alexis
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