Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Swept Away

a hand   a heart

     lain

  dance down

  
within the half-beats

       hushed

waltzing with the night


sultry holding tight

      flushed

movements ever right


vision's drift at play

      lovers

passion swept away

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Lisa Ricci September 30, 2017 at 8:44 AM Good Morning Tim - This entry is lovely and is very much Free Verse in true fashion with expression. Well done completely. I loved the title by the way. May this day find you well.

Darren White September 28, 2017 at 9:03 AM lain hushed flushed lovers... lovely my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2017 at 8:47 AM - A wind of feelings, Tim ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Ella September 27, 2017 at 11:44 PM <3 Beautiful Tim <3

Becca Teagan September 27, 2017 at 11:09 PM This is lovely, Tim!

Arthur Vaso September 27, 2017 at 9:42 PM Oh this reminds me of some of your older poems! Great write!

Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 3:37 PM A nice flowing poem Tim! A joy to read today :)

Jan Allison September 27, 2017 at 3:29 PM Such beautiful and sultry imagery Tim:-) I'm swept away in a wave of emotions:-) hugs jan xx

Dean Wood September 27, 2017 at 2:16 PM Oh yes! I really felt this one Tim. Beautifully expressed.

Alexis Y. September 27, 2017 at 1:44 PM Hi Tim, I found this write to be filled with passion, intoxicating and romantic. I enjoyed every bit of it. Well done:-) Alexis