Jeanne Mcgee Poet Free verse

Swept Aloft

I walk the shore caressed in smiles
   Touched by a thousand memories
       Swept aloft by perfumed sighs
           In the curl of your embrace
              Mermaids carry my love to you
                 The tide returns with your kiss


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Jeanne Mcgee January 22, 2020 at 12:12 PM Hi everyone...I'm down in Mexico running my gallery and working hard...broke a coupe of fingers and writing id still difficult. Thanks so much for your lovely words...I'll be back as soon as my hand heals better... xoxo

Sandra Adams January 17, 2020 at 10:20 AM haven't seen you around in months... just stopping by to say hi... you and your poetry are missed... hope you had a wonderful holiday and that the new year brings you blessings and joy... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos December 4, 2019 at 1:25 PM Loving, flowing, soothing penning. Great write Jeanne, Hugs and blessings. Jenny.

Ralph Sergi November 20, 2019 at 5:20 PM I can visualize the memorable walk in down the shore. Great poem, Jeanne!

Caren Krutsinger November 2, 2019 at 2:27 PM Delicate and tender. Wow!

Gershon Wolf October 28, 2019 at 10:50 PM Sweet as honey-tipped foam on a maple-syrup wave! Delightful images, Jeanne! Warm wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner October 28, 2019 at 2:12 PM Beautiful last line, so evocative and moving-

Quoth Theraven October 28, 2019 at 10:35 AM Jeanne, Very nice aquatic write in this humble sand dollar's opinion. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2019 at 5:39 PM Simply lovely. Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams October 27, 2019 at 1:15 PM i love this one...great use of metaphor... wonderful penning.... hugs :)

Line Gauthier October 27, 2019 at 12:39 PM Absolutely lovely, Jeanne. Delightful.