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Swept Aloft

I walk the shore caressed in smiles Touched by a thousand memories Swept aloft by perfumed sighs In the curl of your embrace Mermaids carry my love to you The tide returns with your kiss Brians Select G 3rd Place

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Date: 1/22/2020 12:12:00 PM
Hi everyone...I'm down in Mexico running my gallery and working hard...broke a coupe of fingers and writing id still difficult. Thanks so much for your lovely words...I'll be back as soon as my hand heals better... xoxo
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Date: 1/17/2020 10:20:00 AM
haven't seen you around in months... just stopping by to say hi... you and your poetry are missed... hope you had a wonderful holiday and that the new year brings you blessings and joy... hugs
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Date: 12/4/2019 1:25:00 PM
Loving, flowing, soothing penning. Great write Jeanne, Hugs and blessings. Jenny.
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Date: 11/20/2019 5:20:00 PM
I can visualize the memorable walk in down the shore. Great poem, Jeanne!
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:27:00 PM
Delicate and tender. Wow!
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Date: 10/28/2019 10:50:00 PM
Sweet as honey-tipped foam on a maple-syrup wave! Delightful images, Jeanne! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/28/2019 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful last line, so evocative and moving-
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Date: 10/28/2019 10:35:00 AM
Jeanne, Very nice aquatic write in this humble sand dollar's opinion. -Richard
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Date: 10/27/2019 5:39:00 PM
Simply lovely. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/27/2019 1:15:00 PM
i love this one...great use of metaphor... wonderful penning.... hugs :)
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Date: 10/27/2019 12:39:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, Jeanne. Delightful.
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