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Summertime Poetry Contest 

Sponsored by Gina McIntosh  ~  July 14, 2023

One of those humid, hard-to-breathe summers when flowers bloom across meadows and fields. Fireflies glow at night to songs of hummers, cicada; whose loud army never yields Days at the beach, building castles of sand Fishing trips to catch and cook our own feast Time spent in the sun until we were tanned Watching the golden orb rise in the East Swinging on the porch, strong arms around me Grateful for my blessings and wafts of breeze Quite content with life, and sipping sweet tea watching limbs sway in weeping willow trees Whispered words spoken beneath starlit skies Love like ours brings tears of joy to my eyes

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Date: 7/30/2023 11:58:00 PM
A very beautiful sonnet on Sweltry Summer. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/30/2023 1:55:00 AM
Wow. So amazing. Beautiful!!! Love it. Congrats on a top win. Love, Gina
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/30/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for allowing it a placement on your winning list, Gina.
Date: 7/14/2023 3:47:00 PM
what a delightful summer time sonnet Lin full of sights and sounds of summer:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/30/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks a bunch for your fine comments, Jan.
Date: 7/14/2023 3:34:00 PM
A gorgeous sonnet- so clever! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/14/2023 1:38:00 PM
put a bonnet on that sonnet its hot out there. The cadence of summer beautifully captured.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/30/2023 8:23:00 AM
It's terribly hot here, John. This week is supposed to set records, but it's sweltering in many places. Thank you for enjoying my summer sonnet.
Date: 7/14/2023 11:05:00 AM
Oh, this is a sonnet. You can become my guru.
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Date: 7/14/2023 11:51:00 AM
We could write one together if you wish, Jay.
Date: 7/14/2023 11:04:00 AM
Very sweet.
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Date: 7/14/2023 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Alex.
Date: 7/14/2023 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful portrayal of summer with loving seniments.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/14/2023 11:50:00 AM
Thanks very much, Jay,

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