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Sweets In the Suite

Savory watermelon, sour apple
My taste buds arouse at the thought
Of the unimaginable experience to come
The sweetest sensation to conquer my mouth
I can't wait to open the wrapper

Sweets in the suite for me

The lobby was fully of these tiny eats
A lady even offered one to me
A warhead I was warned never to meet
Their taste too sour to even remotely please
Too late I swallowed it with ease
It was the wrong decision indeed
That's the last of those I'll ever see
No more candy in the suite for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/26/2014 6:37:00 PM
Too bad. All the more for me. Congratulations on a funny one, Alex. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:32:00 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique,Alex
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