Pat Adams Poet Etheree

Sweets

Sweets
Call me
Eat me now
I"m what you want
So hard to resist
Remember my sweetness
But what about love handles?
You'll do exercises tonight
I'm not sure there's any truth to that
I guess I'll just have one more in a row!

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Scott Thirtyseven May 31, 2018 at 8:31 AM wonderful piece of poetry, a joy to read. Really enjoyed the 2nd to last line. Pat Adams May 31, 2018 at 2:37 PM Thank you Scott. An attempt at something different!

Line Gauthier March 22, 2018 at 10:11 PM And a personification no less, Pat. Very sweet. Pat Adams March 23, 2018 at 3:20 PM Ha! That's a good point! I didn't think of that. Thanks, pat

Cheryl Hoffman March 22, 2018 at 7:38 PM I only keep some hard candy on hand when I work because of the running around I do…other than that not big on sweets! Nice sweet one Pat!~Che :) Pat Adams March 22, 2018 at 9:37 PM Thank you much Cheryl!!...........80)