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Sweets

Sweets Call me Eat me now I"m what you want So hard to resist Remember my sweetness But what about love handles? You'll do exercises tonight I'm not sure there's any truth to that I guess I'll just have one more in a row!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Scott Thirtyseven
Date: 5/31/2018 8:31:00 AM
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wonderful piece of poetry, a joy to read. Really enjoyed the 2nd to last line.
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Pat Adams
Date: 5/31/2018 2:37:00 PM
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Thank you Scott. An attempt at something different!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 10:11:00 PM
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And a personification no less, Pat. Very sweet.
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Pat Adams
Date: 3/23/2018 3:20:00 PM
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Ha! That's a good point! I didn't think of that. Thanks, pat
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/22/2018 7:38:00 PM
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I only keep some hard candy on hand when I work because of the running around I do…other than that not big on sweets! Nice sweet one Pat!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 3/22/2018 9:37:00 PM
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Thank you much Cheryl!!...........80)

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