Sweetness

Sweetness

Suddenly the sweetness around the moon!
Set an open fire with magic into my heart.
A campfire burning deep within.
Found a way to kick start my heart again.
Flowing with flowers in the midnight skies.
Feelings of butterflies passing right before my eyes.
A basket of ribbons turning my stomach into knots.
Gave me pleasure to know life's hidden thoughts...

A sweet spell to your compel....
Fell in to my laps like the secret of forbidden lust......
Dreaming that captivate the energy of me and you....
lost inside the demons,, no one can trust.....

Suddenly my heart turned into rust!
Now I sink like yesterdays fallen star.
Singing words that sadden my soul to the floor.
Lost into the darkness, hiding in the corner of my room.
Denying the faces of reality.
Forgetting about the pleasure of my own sensuality.
A desire to reject my own dignity.
Stuck with the affliction that life has no meaning.

A sour taste to the rotten words I curse....
I fell  into the wishing well of an evil spell....
Dreams that put my heart to sleep with out thirst....
Found the angles, that released my curse....

BY;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/4/2016 11:08:00 PM
yes you are **SKAT**
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:25:00 PM
But instead we are playing hide and seek.
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Date: 11/27/2013 7:47:00 PM
Linda This write is a journey for emotional ups and downs. You took the reader through sadness, happiness, desire, sorrow and finally peace. Nice job my friend Thanks for the nice words on my Holiday Wishes poem. Enjoy all the yummies your daughter is cooking.
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Date: 1/22/2013 8:03:00 AM
Another stunning write that again holds my breath and moves my whole being. I stayed longer here this evening reading and rereading many of the marvelous writes of my number 1 idol. Million thanks for sharing your super precious gems my dear sis! Thank you so much also for your visit and your message/hearing from you will always brighten my day! love always &forever, Leonora
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Date: 1/8/2013 8:04:00 PM
thanks for all the many sweet comments. Notice I wrote this under your poem sweetness. haha
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Date: 12/2/2012 2:41:00 PM
wow, looking back on your poetry, i'm enjoying these beauties
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Date: 2/20/2011 10:43:00 PM
Brilliantly composed a gem of a Poem my friend. The first stanza of this Poem is more than beautiful and so enchanting. Great write from your skillful pen. I have placed the next of 'When the Earth was in danger'. Hope you would like the story. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Poet D
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:18:00 PM
Wow destroyer this is pretty incredible I love how it starts out so blissfully then the theme changes...very articulate
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:58:00 PM
HI, again, P.D. How ya doin' there??
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:25:00 PM
Intense words from a poet genious ( thats what turns~continue~) always Michael
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:15:00 PM
Hi Linda, your writing is lovely...I wanted to explain the concept of Shadow...but where can I do it? I would enjoy discussing this with you but how... I would be happy to send my g mail address but do not want to be inappropriate...??? BTW I love this poem!!
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:19:00 AM
enjoy reading your poems! thanks for the comments- a.t.
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Date: 1/12/2011 6:34:00 PM
fell into the wishing well of an evil spell...cool... you got awesome ways of saying things PD
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Date: 1/12/2011 5:53:00 PM
HI again,your "sweetness" did you ever hear Crocodile Rock yet?
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:23:00 AM
Hi P.D.! Ouch...appears as though something had fallen away from the "campfire", and it doesn't appear to have been a marshmallow. I'm sure your angels stay close to you, while awake and when asleep. Blessings to you! Mikki
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Date: 1/5/2011 6:10:00 AM
Another beautiful sketch of a striking writes from you my friend. Although sad and a little painful but beautifully expressed and thank for your kind and precious comments on ' While Watching the Dark Clouds'. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet D
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:10:00 PM
soupmail.
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:26:00 PM
Wow, this..... is... amazing
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:49:00 AM
Wow pd the images are superb and very disturbing. The flow is great my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:56:00 AM
intense and moving, dream like wonderful
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Date: 12/31/2010 8:05:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my write miss. It is easy to fall into a lustful manner, as the darkness can overtake us...... well written, Cindy
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:29:00 PM
Awesome comments,,, every one.., Hope everyone enjoys the the new year. May we all be blessed with a wonderful & awesome..;-) New Year! Take care*Luv~SKITTY SKAT
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:00:00 PM
you've been hurt by someone(something) over time, Sid? gosh, it can take forever to mend & get rid of.): but you never seem to lose your touch even if you're down these days... its more like you're terrified of something.it moritifies you greatly..at least, thats what im getting from your writes. i hope you have a great new years as well! ~Always&Forever Lynn
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:54:00 PM
Wishing u the happiest new year's eve luv and hope u check out my new blog entitled ... A TOAST ..what else? ..haha.. enjoy my friend with luv from all of us...PD my BFF..
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Date: 12/31/2010 11:11:00 AM
Awesome, p.d. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Thanks for all your kind comments during 2010. Wishing you and yours a very healthy and happy 2011. luv Ralph
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