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Sweetly Fragrant

Sitting under the pale pink running rose At the end of a beautiful Autumn Day Searching for inspirational sonnet to compose For my love who lives in heaven's way To me He's like a honeysuckle vine Blooming in the month of May Sweetly fragrant essence among the pines He's like the gold of mountains that's refine To me He's like the babbling brook Sweetly singing in tune For everything in heaven He forsook Fo prove His love for me is beyond the moon Words cannot describe my love for Him But daily I'll try to draw close in His realm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/9/2009 7:25:00 PM
hot poem!!
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Date: 12/7/2009 1:30:00 PM
how softly intimately personal and sweet! keep the sonnets coming- you're gifted! And thanks! Susan Mills
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Date: 12/4/2009 2:23:00 PM
Great write, Sara, inspiring to read. The flow is good, except on a couple of lines, became a bit shoppy. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:07:00 PM
Love this Sara...So wonderful...Marty
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Date: 12/3/2009 2:44:00 PM
This says you really miss him.Beautiful words enjoyed very much.Thanks for the kind comment.Teresa
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:35:00 PM
Sara, this is another gem penned by a lady with heart and warmth for her faith >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 11:30:00 AM
Superb visuals you have painted with words...much love and adoration can be felt! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary
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Date: 12/3/2009 11:05:00 AM
Very well put Sara.Pine essence so divine.I love your words! Thank you for your lovely comment.God Bless....PRINCE
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Date: 12/3/2009 9:00:00 AM
Yes, it's that 'sweetly fragrant'...indescribable something. You've hit it perfectly. So, my Brother Billy poem...that 'sweetly fragrant' something. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:27:00 AM
I especially love lines 5, 6, and 7 of this beautiful sonnet. Wonderful comparison! Thank you so much for your kind words about my stepfather and for your prayers. I appreciate them so much! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful soul! Exceptional imagery and flow, Sara! Love it! Goes to my favs! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:02:00 AM
And so shall we all try to draw close in His realm... wonderful spiritual thoughts from your graciously talented pen.. such unique words to express this special thought...blessings... luv .. enjoyed.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:55:00 AM
Beautifully written nice poem. Thanks and thanks a lot for your kind and lovely comments on my poem Art of Living and Loving. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:46:00 AM
One for the favourites Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:55:00 PM
hope your pen doesn't skip out on you and the ideas flow fluidly!
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Date: 12/2/2009 2:28:00 PM
Just read Richard's comment and I must agree that our Lord is "like a superman." Your poem is beautifully written with style, grace and imagery. How happy He must be that you wrote it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:45:00 PM
Looking good Sara...Sounds like a superman...Nice sonnet...RdP
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Date: 12/2/2009 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful poetry today Sara......:JP]
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Date: 12/2/2009 10:23:00 AM
"He lives or' the way?" Well, let's get together with this guy. Nice write. Love, daver
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Date: 12/2/2009 10:06:00 AM
Hi Sara, saw you had posted twice, I comment on the one you erased and so wanted to comment again! Sweetly Frangrant indeed! I can smell the blossoms all the way here in Alaska! smile. Beautifully poetic. I want to thank you also for letting me know how your doing. I hope your finger heals quick. Glad it isn't stopping you from writing. Love Light Patty
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