Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

Sweetly Fragrant

Sitting under the pale pink running rose
At the end of a beautiful Autumn Day
Searching for inspirational sonnet to compose
For my love who lives in heaven's  way

To me He's like a honeysuckle vine
Blooming in the month of May
Sweetly fragrant essence among the pines
He's like the gold of mountains that's refine

To me He's like the babbling brook
Sweetly singing in tune
For everything in heaven He forsook
Fo prove His love for me is beyond the moon

Words cannot describe my love for Him
But daily I'll try to draw close in His realm

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Doris Culverhouse December 9, 2009 at 7:25 PM hot poem!!

Susan Mills December 7, 2009 at 1:30 PM how softly intimately personal and sweet! keep the sonnets coming- you're gifted! And thanks! Susan Mills

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 4, 2009 at 2:23 PM Great write, Sara, inspiring to read. The flow is good, except on a couple of lines, became a bit shoppy. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Marty Owens December 3, 2009 at 7:07 PM Love this Sara...So wonderful...Marty

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet December 3, 2009 at 2:44 PM This says you really miss him.Beautiful words enjoyed very much.Thanks for the kind comment.Teresa

James Fraser December 3, 2009 at 12:35 PM Sara, this is another gem penned by a lady with heart and warmth for her faith >> James

Mary Meade Stephenson December 3, 2009 at 11:30 AM Superb visuals you have painted with words...much love and adoration can be felt! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary

Prince Freakasso December 3, 2009 at 11:05 AM Very well put Sara.Pine essence so divine.I love your words! Thank you for your lovely comment.God Bless....PRINCE

Daver Austin December 3, 2009 at 9:00 AM Yes, it's that 'sweetly fragrant'...indescribable something. You've hit it perfectly. So, my Brother Billy poem...that 'sweetly fragrant' something. BIG LOVE, daver

Juliane Thomas December 3, 2009 at 7:27 AM I especially love lines 5, 6, and 7 of this beautiful sonnet. Wonderful comparison! Thank you so much for your kind words about my stepfather and for your prayers. I appreciate them so much! ~Juliane

Audrey Haick December 3, 2009 at 6:35 AM Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful soul! Exceptional imagery and flow, Sara! Love it! Goes to my favs! Peace and love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 3, 2009 at 6:02 AM And so shall we all try to draw close in His realm... wonderful spiritual thoughts from your graciously talented pen.. such unique words to express this special thought...blessings... luv .. enjoyed.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Ravindra K Kapoor December 3, 2009 at 1:55 AM Beautifully written nice poem. Thanks and thanks a lot for your kind and lovely comments on my poem Art of Living and Loving. With best wishes and love Ravindra

Brian Strand December 3, 2009 at 12:46 AM One for the favourites Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today

Doris Culverhouse December 2, 2009 at 5:55 PM hope your pen doesn't skip out on you and the ideas flow fluidly!

Carolyn Devonshire December 2, 2009 at 2:28 PM Just read Richard's comment and I must agree that our Lord is "like a superman." Your poem is beautifully written with style, grace and imagery. How happy He must be that you wrote it! Love, Carolyn

Richard Pickett December 2, 2009 at 12:45 PM Looking good Sara...Sounds like a superman...Nice sonnet...RdP

Jared Pickett December 2, 2009 at 11:52 AM Beautiful poetry today Sara......:JP]

Daver Austin December 2, 2009 at 10:23 AM "He lives or' the way?" Well, let's get together with this guy. Nice write. Love, daver

P Sheart December 2, 2009 at 10:06 AM Hi Sara, saw you had posted twice, I comment on the one you erased and so wanted to comment again! Sweetly Frangrant indeed! I can smell the blossoms all the way here in Alaska! smile. Beautifully poetic. I want to thank you also for letting me know how your doing. I hope your finger heals quick. Glad it isn't stopping you from writing. Love Light Patty