SWEETHEART - IT'S CHRISTMAS EVE!

My darling, my dearest, my loving man –
it is a perfect fire you have going,
the atmosphere is Christmas-cheer glowing.
I delight in you, me and our cider brew 
in this, our own romantic freedom sphere.
Your presence, talk and kisses are my heaven.

I love you calling me sweetheart, always have –
I wish your voice were something I could grab,
plus, your embrace, that neither would diminish.
It could be my blessing, come wrapped as present.
Yes, you’re right, sure, we’ll always be together …
sipping cider, sharing life’s joys and rifts.

Our love has lent richness to five Christmas’ times
and still your presence brings me joy undefined.
More cider? … Bit sleepy?  – I’ll tuck this pillow.
Drink … there, that’s it … so, I’ve had you shadowed,
that is, you and the she you never tried to quit.
Scared? … It's just my loving gift of arsenic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Hello Cay Cay, the ending I was not expecting. Wow! I do not blame you. have a nice evening my friend.
Burdon Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 10:31 PM
My friend..how fortunate I am to be a reader of such epic poetry. PROLIFIC POET. Never knuckle under keep me in amazement. 40 is the new number 1.
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 10:46 PM
You just made me high on pure poetry validation adrenaline and I cannot think of single expression of thanks adequate enough for what you've given me ... the intangible sits a bit with me now - I am grateful, love the buzz
Gondolf Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 12:39 PM
Wow, CayCay, I thought this was such a romantic verse right up to the last few lines...that caught me by surprise. An unexpectedly humorous ending. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you had a good thanksgiving. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Lol....cider sweet and then bitter surprise. I loved your ending CayCay! I have seen actual cases like this where the guy has no clue. Fantastic entry! ; ) Happy Thanksgiving my dear friend! xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:42 PM
So the contest asks for a twist?? I just saw you down below mentioning that to someone!!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:41 PM
oh my, You really had me going there. i thought it was about Tim. Well, let's hope not, or he is in real trouble. hahaha. Awesome twist!!
Horsman Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Oh just love that cutting end, wonderful poetry, Bathos would be proud of you...
Raven Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Hi Cay Cay, this is an excellent write. I was sailing along on the breath of such love and then the boat sank. I didn't see that coming. A most creative write. It reminded me of the last time I drank cider. I ended up going down a flight of stairs. If nothing else, it was a good laugh for those present. I enjoyed the ride my friend. A fave. have a wonderful end to your Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Excellent, CayCay! You wowed me with romantic words and cider...and then flipped me over to taste a bitter end! This goes to my faves. Regards // paul
Vaso Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:00 AM
oh my CayCay this is a fav, I loved the twist!
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Quite a festive poem you wrote CayCay..you had me going in rhythm of the celebration..but then that ending was quite a turn. Best for a win.
Godwin Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 7:57 PM
A big turn, creatively initiated was my goal. Such can really change a reader's facial expression, huh? Enjoyed your comments, and I thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Curtis Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 6:06 AM
I'll have my cider without a twist pleases, you were making feel all Christmas-y and wanting it to come early, till the last line, now I'm not sure.........
Godwin Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 6:43 AM
The arsenic in your cider has probably created a confusion problem. Don't worry - it won't last. Thanks for visiting ... CayCay
Warrior Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:34 PM
Excellent entry CayCay...your writing is true to the bone...love it...now I'm going to have some apple cider lol...ready for a win...love & cider sipping...^WW^
Godwin Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Love you loving it and visiting. I have not reached a 'state of ready' for Fall yet, much less Christmas and its poison, I mean, ciders! Thank you ... CayCay
Sharp Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:05 PM
The sweetest moments are the most tenuous, I suppose. Very mischievous, a nice bit of tongue in cheek menace. Nicely crafted piece.
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:12 PM
I had finished the poem for the contest, THEN realized the description called for a twist, so, yes .. I had to put on my mischievous hat (which I keep very close) and make revisions. Thanks for visiting ... CayCay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Lol! Awesome piece CayCay, enjoyed! xomo
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Are you laughing at murder? I'm so darn glad that you are! Thanks for coming around and commenting, I appreciate it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Sounds like your life has turned to happy moments .. Christmas Cheers sweet lady
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 10:50 PM
I did read it I just didn't get the humor , but like my husband always said it takes me a few days to get anything :)
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Eve, I'm laughing because I don't think you made it to the last stanza - you'll see why it is indeed happy. Please do check it out so you can laugh with me - that's always good. Be blessed, dear heart ... CayCay
Leiser Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Wow, now that’s a real twist at the end! Things were going along so nicely, too! I really enjoyed this poem, CayCay! Good luck in the contest. :)
Godwin Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much for such positive feedback. You're the first to comment and you gave me breathing room - I appreciate that. Take good care ... CayCay
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